Ooh, I'm loving this already and I like the oddly warm and domestic (and yet somehow still awkward) scene of them all waking up and poor Jeb watching his father! ♥ Cannot wait for more!
\o/ I'm so glad! That's just the feeling I was going for - that sense of togetherness that Jeb can see yet he's still feeling out-of-sorts being thrown into this group of men he really doesn't know all that well. :D Jeb's going to have a lot of stuff to work through with regards to his father, I'm sure!
*is staring at the blank spot where the next chapter should be* Hopefully more will come soon! *grin*
It’s still Glitch,” he said kindly. “And I’m just fine, thank you for asking. It’s you we’re worried about.”
OMG. That gave me chills. I love the sense you created here that the three friends have just been gathered around Jeb for hours, watching over him while resting themselves. Glitch and Wyatt all comfortable on the sofa. And Jeb's perceptions of Raw! And the thing about Raw's name. You're totally making me a Jeb/Raw shipper here. Quick! Somebody make an icon!
And this was pure ♥ : More unexpected was the second man curled up half on his father’s lap, zipper hidden where it was tucked in the crook of Wyatt’s elbow.
Yay for making you a shipper!! *squeeee* I'm probably the only one crazy enough to make this pairing happen, so I'm thrilled that you like it so much! I totally need an icon! Though I'm still quite in love with this Raw icon I grabbed from koslorollo. *pets the pretty*
Oooh yes...that was one of the little images I quite liked, having Glitch all tucked up in Wyatt like that, hiding his zipper. Something symbolic there, I'm sure...:)
I promised to start this a few days ago, I would have too but another bout of stomach trouble kept me busy, but I have to admit I was kind of hesitant. I love your stories, you know that, but you know what a stick in the mud I am about my about my ship's, so I was, I don't know, reluctant to start on a long piece that was primarily about another ship.
'bangs head on table' I am so silly! I have to tell you, no lie, I started tearing up by the end of this first part, it so gently enfolded me into this verse and made me so curious about how this story will unfold.
Ok, so I've gushed a little :D but I just wanted you to know.
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*is staring at the blank spot where the next chapter should be* Hopefully more will come soon! *grin*
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OMG. That gave me chills. I love the sense you created here that the three friends have just been gathered around Jeb for hours, watching over him while resting themselves. Glitch and Wyatt all comfortable on the sofa. And Jeb's perceptions of Raw! And the thing about Raw's name. You're totally making me a Jeb/Raw shipper here. Quick! Somebody make an icon!
And this was pure ♥ :
More unexpected was the second man curled up half on his father’s lap, zipper hidden where it was tucked in the crook of Wyatt’s elbow.
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Oooh yes...that was one of the little images I quite liked, having Glitch all tucked up in Wyatt like that, hiding his zipper. Something symbolic there, I'm sure...:)
Thank you so much!!
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I promised to start this a few days ago, I would have too but another bout of stomach trouble kept me busy, but I have to admit I was kind of hesitant. I love your stories, you know that, but you know what a stick in the mud I am about my about my ship's, so I was, I don't know, reluctant to start on a long piece that was primarily about another ship.
'bangs head on table' I am so silly! I have to tell you, no lie, I started tearing up by the end of this first part, it so gently enfolded me into this verse and made me so curious about how this story will unfold.
Ok, so I've gushed a little :D but I just wanted you to know.
You rock, Hon!
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THANK YOU! \o/
Don't worry, there's plenty of Glitch/Cain in there, too! *grin*
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