Comments | surranndie: Tin Man Grand Prix fic #5: Five Amid a Lifetime

surranndie

Tin Man Grand Prix fic #5: Five Amid a Lifetime

Aug 04, 2008 11:51

Title: Five Amid a Lifetime
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Cain was always there to help him remember.

( Cain saw that moment of hesitation, that tiny tremble in Glitch’s hand. )

grandprix, tinman, fanfic

Comments 8

lionille August 5 2008, 15:04:06 UTC

Oh, lovely, lovely. Glitch thinking his memories impoved and it's just Cain filling in the gaps for him! The first two paragraphs of this were especially beautiful.

surranndie August 5 2008, 15:08:17 UTC

*squee* Thank you! I liked the idea that neither of them noticed it, too. It's just a natural part of their relationship. :)

avari_maethor August 9 2008, 04:17:47 UTC

Ohhhh I loved this! I loved the progression. My fave was when Cain told him which bowl/direction under the cover of napkin.

surranndie August 9 2008, 04:28:31 UTC

Yay! Thanks so much! This is one of my favorites of the challenge, so I'm glad you liked it!! I just like the idea of Cain being so subtle and guiding him along unconsciously.

jeymien August 11 2008, 18:43:40 UTC

Another cute one :) Aww.

surranndie August 11 2008, 18:45:31 UTC

*happy grin* Thanks so much!

ciara__mist February 1 2009, 20:41:32 UTC

Beautifully written! Cain is just so damn sweet and Glitch too damn adorable...though I don't think it's possible to be to sweet and adorable...wait, I take that back, it is. Just not for these two men lol. Especially love the first one. So cute. *grins giddily*

surranndie February 1 2009, 20:57:39 UTC

Aww, thank you!! I think this was one of the most popular of the Grand Prix fics - I'm really happy with it. So I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! :D