Tin Man fanfic: The Remote (WIP)

Jun 14, 2008 14:44

As usual, I've been nibbled by a plot bunny and have started a new WIP. I have no idea where this is going, but that's never stopped me before ( Read more... )

tinman, fanfic, the remote

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lionille June 14 2008, 22:49:39 UTC
Oh WOW this had a lot of suspense and surprise to it - I think I was just as shocked as Glitch when it was revealed what room they were in, and the results of his turning the dial! (man, he needs supervision!)
Most shocking was this:
End Part 1
I can't wait to see the rest! ;)
I especially liked this line:
Raw, Cain and Glitch stuck together as the final group, oddly unwilling to separate.
And I also really liked Cain's reaction - that he didn't get angry with Glitch but was immediately comforting and trying to help.

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surranndie June 15 2008, 00:05:07 UTC

:D Thanks so much...I wasn't quite sure how this first part sounded, to be honest. Mostly just frantic writing to get the image down while it was bugging me.

(man, he needs supervision!) I know! And he had TWO babysitters this time!!

I'm glad you liked Cain's reaction, too - I just can't picture him getting angry at Glitch, considering he knows Glitch can't help himself most of the time. Honesly, I only have a very vague idea of where this story could go but nothing clear enough to write yet. But you know me...there will most likely be a new part posted tomorrow. :D

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candacestls June 14 2008, 22:58:03 UTC
Poor Glitch! Cain is going to be one pissed off hombre isn't he? Please tell me there's going to be a lot of writhing and 'hold me til the pain goes away'ing, please?

I know I'm a sick puppy but I love hurt/comfort :D

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surranndie June 15 2008, 00:07:46 UTC

Cain won't get angry at Glitch, but there will no doubt be some molar-grinding in his near future when they go find Az. *grin*

I'm with you there - hurt/comfort is an all-encompassing addiction of mine and this is just another excuse to indulge in that! I'm sure Glitch will be happy to comply! :D

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kseda June 15 2008, 03:17:33 UTC
....D: And that's the good D: Am giddy with anticipation of where this may be going.

Poor Glitch. There really is NO end to the various and sundry ways we can torture him, is there? I'm almost thinking we need to come up with an amnesty day, upon which there shall be only Fluff and Good Times and Hawt Sexings for everyone's favorite headcase.

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surranndie June 15 2008, 03:32:45 UTC

\o/ I'm so happy to cause the giddy! Now, I just have to figure out where it's going! :D

Glitch is just...such a perfect puppy to beat on! I can't help it, I just work with what the series gave us! *innocent whistling* I can totally get behind the Amnesty Day for Glitch idea, though!

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avari_maethor June 15 2008, 03:22:44 UTC
This... is... going... to... be... AMAZING. Just the first part and I'm already short of breath.

What is this power you have over me?

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surranndie June 15 2008, 03:35:09 UTC

OH! That's such an awesome set of compliments!! *is thrilled* I promise to use the power only for good, not for evil. Unless you consider torturing Glitch to be evil, in which case...umm, only for evil. *grin*

*scampers off to ponder what to write for the next part*

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avari_maethor June 15 2008, 03:47:45 UTC
I'm a angst whore... so I'm not sure if it's evil or good...

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ciara__mist January 27 2009, 21:08:34 UTC
oh wow. Just wow. with a side of holy shit.

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surranndie January 28 2009, 00:36:47 UTC
*evil grin* I do so love to torture Glitch. :D Best reaction ever! *giggles*

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