Tattoo

[surly05]

Hey everyone, I have the preliminary design for my tattoo finished.
It is going on my upper back, and I am thinking it is going to be like 5" across and 3" down, or approximately that, and in black and white scale.
Please tell me what you think//how I can make it better:

Comments

[whipd_creme]

perhaps you should have one of those strange Wall creatures like on the CD packet thing on there?
and also, what about making the walll sort of jagged; ie, not a rectangle? like, only have full length bricks, so that the ends are not straight, you know what i mean? it would have the effect of showing not just (multiple) bricks in the entire wall, as if a big piece, as well as the single brick, had been taken out?

just some thoughts

[whipd_creme]

perhaps you should have one of those strange Wall creatures like on the CD packet thing on there?
and also, what about making the walll sort of jagged; ie, not a rectangle? like, only have full length bricks, so that the ends are not straight, you know what i mean? it would have the effect of showing not just (multiple) bricks in the entire wall, as if a big piece, as well as the single brick, had been taken out?

just some thoughts

[schmurph]

eh.

[anonymous]

first thought...you could do better, just going off what you were telling me abotu what you wanted to do before it sounded really awesome. This simplier idea is alright, I like that guys idea with not making it just rectangle. Maybe not so boxey? I like the statement though, maybe do a different style of font? You'll definitely have to let me know what your gonna do! I cant wait to see it!!

[schmurph]

oh wait, i get it now. Dat's tight yo. Their suggestions are solid. FYI - The new season of The Real World has a Russian girl on it. I am excited.