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katakokk in suridasu

14 | {narnia} the only things that echo - gen

Jul 18, 2009 14:21

So, here we go. It's been a while since I wrote real fanfiction, but here cometh the Narnia!

Title: the only things that echo
Rating: PG for slight language and implied incest
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairings/Characters: Pevensies, Lucy-centric, Peter/Susan (implied)
Word Count: 1,113
Summary: Things are forgotten as time passes through ( Read more... )

[gen], [fandom] chronicles of narnia

Comments 8

be_themoon July 20 2009, 16:47:12 UTC

Oh, Lucy, poor dear. And Susan. And Peter. And, aww, Edmund!

Also, Lucy just automatically assumes Peter will take Susan's side, hee!

Oh, Lucy. Always the queen.

katakokk July 20 2009, 17:24:19 UTC

I know, Lucy...she confused me a lot especially after reading a lot of Bedlam's fic, but I think I've got a hold on her character now. :)

The Peter/Susan undertones kind of flood my brain right now, so yeah. Ehe.

She is!

Thanks for reading. :D

...Also, is it weird that lassiterfics wrote a fic by the same title, except it's a Merlin fic?

turkeyish July 22 2009, 01:31:04 UTC

oh lucy, you're a bit disturbing here, aren't you? even though i do understand where you're coming from.

haha i'm talking to your fic, how odd. :P

just like the companion piece to this, i absolutely love the tension that laces your words - it's all very alive and real.

and i just want to hug your edmund. :(

katakokk July 22 2009, 01:43:14 UTC

Hahaha, 'sall right. Lucy, well, Lucy may have gone off the deep end a little bit. I dunno, I didn't mean for that to happen, but insane!Lucy is fun to write, so it's all good. :D

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you think it sounds realistic. ♥

Edmund. *huggles* I couldn't help it, the opportunity for mean!Lucy presented itself. *hides*

zempasuchil September 7 2009, 04:03:45 UTC

Oh, Lucy! I like this projection of her - it's awfully painful and seems so wrong compared to the happy girl before but she is still so strong and about truth and fairness. she kind of goes nuts, doesn't she? man. but I totally get her here.
and OH EDMUND <3 he doesn't insist on involving himself like Peter does but his few words to her are so strong and say so much.
this is vivid. great dysfunctional England!Pevensies.

katakokk September 7 2009, 04:51:35 UTC

She's just...the same, but also completely different. She experienced life in Narnia and comes back to England and hates it. She's still holding by her moral beliefs (whatever they may be, my Lucy's rather amoral because of Narnia), but she's so fucked over from being treated like a child in a world of smog and pavement that she goes off the deep end, willingly, I think. There's a part of her that's aware that she's going crazy, but just kind of goes along with it.

Edmund (almost) always knows what to say, and how to say it, because he's Edmund. But insane!Lucy is also spiteful!Lucy, so yeah.

Thanks so much, glad you like it! <3333

caramelsilver November 28 2009, 22:51:50 UTC

I love Lucy. And I can really see her side of the picture and it must be frustrating to know that they won't take her side.

I also love her when she's angry, she can be quite scary.

Really, really liked the ending; with the talk with Edmund and to the end.

I really like your writing style Kathy- well done.

katakokk November 28 2009, 23:00:37 UTC

She's just really misunderstood at this point, but she's also lashing out at her family so they can't really get close enough to understand. Everyone's at fault.

She is very scary when she's angry! Very scary. Though Susan and Edmund tend to do the whole quietly angry and making the temperature of the room drop thing, screaming is quite scary too. :)

Thank you so much! ♥