To Please the Monster Inside [Carlisle/Jasper][Chapter Nineteen]

[surgical_rush]

Title: To Please the Monster Inside [Chapter Nineteen]
Pairing: Carlisle/Jasper
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Fiction
Summary: The monster inside Jasper lusts for human blood. When the desire is too strong to resist, there is only one who can help. Carlisle tamed this monster once, and now he must try again.

Comments

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[harrietmary]

I was expecting this even less than the last chapter.
I knew things were bad for Jasper but I did'nt think they'd be that bad.
I feel sad for him , and all his family.

You are still writing beautiful , I can picture clearly the scenes you describe. Your use of language is outstanding.

If I wasnt hooked before , I am now.

Really can't wait 'till the next part.

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[surgical_rush]

I was unsure of this chapter. It was difficult for me to write.

But thank you for your comments.

They give me a positive mind for writing with.

:)

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[sodiumbisulfite]

I just found this story, and I absolutely love it. Your descriptions are wonderful, and it is so easy to just fall into this world you have created. Awesome! Cant wait for more!

[surgical_rush]

Its fantastic to hear that you are enjoying my story, and hope I can keep you hooked in the future.

Thank you for your comment.

:)

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