To Please the Monster Inside [Carlisle/Jasper][Chapter Six]

[surgical_rush]

Title: To Please the Monster Inside [Chapter Six]
Pairing: Carlisle/Jasper, Jasper/Alice
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Fiction
Summary: The monster inside Jasper lusts for human blood. When the desire is too strong to resist, there is only one who can help. Carlisle tamed this monster once, and now he must try again.

Comments

[surgical_rush]

Thanks so much.

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[post_script3]

Another great chapter as usual. Excellent prose and the disposition of the text gives it a certain atmosphere. I can imagine Jasper in my head strutting around, a small contented smile on his face, humming...

I feel bad for Alice and Esme. Because we all know what's coming. Ok I am totally anticipating a lemon *wiggle eyebrows*. That or a fight since the Volturi are on coming.

[surgical_rush]

I agree, even though its my story, I still feel bad for little Alice and sweet Esme. They're both so cute and in love with their men. And then Jasper has to go and seduce Carlisle and make Alice cry.

But who knows what will happen.

As always, thanks a bunch for your comments - they are my caffeine and give me the energy to keep writing.

x

[comesaregular]

I still don't really understand why Edward would be mad. What's it to him, really? Another great chapter.:)

[jerrykdestiny]

I love the book