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To Please the Monster Inside [Carlisle/Jasper][Chapter Two]

Apr 18, 2009 22:28

Title: To Please the Monster Inside [Chapter Two]
Pairing: Carlisle/Jasper
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Fiction
Summary: The monster inside Jasper lusts for human blood. When the desire is too strong to resist, there is only one who can help. Carlisle tamed this monster once, and now he must try again.

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twilight slash, carlisle/jasper

Comments 9

post_script3 April 18 2009, 19:03:31 UTC

Interesting pairing...I must say I'm intrigued...(and slightly hot and bothered.)

Also. FIRST!!
Actually you're the first author I've reviewed on Live Journal while logged onto my account.
Looking forward to reading more of your story.

surgical_rush April 18 2009, 23:37:41 UTC

Well then, I feel honored to be the first.

I shall definitely update as often as possible, so please do let me know what you think as the story progresses.

Thank you.

x

you_ravish_me April 18 2009, 19:35:29 UTC

This pairing ... god help me ... i like it(Em/Jazz in stillmy OTP^_^). Very nicely written. If you have more in stock, I won't be opposed ;P

surgical_rush April 18 2009, 23:34:54 UTC

Thank you so much. Feedback is always appreciated, especially when its as lovely as yours.

Yes, I think it is an interesting pairing, there is very little of it around.

x

Em/Jazz post_script3 April 20 2009, 03:46:05 UTC

You mentioned that Emmett and Jasper are your OTP. I'm really interested in them too but I haven't been able to find any good long fics (actually I couldn't find anything beyond drabbles) maybe you could point me in the right direction.

Thanks
your help would be very much appreciated!

Re: Em/Jazz post_script3 April 20 2009, 03:48:09 UTC

the comment is for you_ravish_me...

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animaven April 19 2009, 04:08:25 UTC

This is so different. Jasper drinking from Carlisle in this manner, because it assuages his desire for human blood. Like Jasper, I wonder why this is so. Look forward to the future chapters.

comesaregular April 28 2009, 16:41:39 UTC

God.. wow, okay. Uhh, I hadn´t expected that. I like it though, of course my mind got pervy immediately and I couldn't understand how simply sex could help him. This clears it up. Anyway, I'm just as curious as Jasper is as to why that would work. I mean, what would he drink? Venom, right? Or the animal-blood that Carlisle's drunk? God, this is really interesting.:) I'm glad there are more chapters waiting for me.;)