To Please The Monster Inside [Carlisle/Jasper][Chapter 33]

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Title: To Please The Monster Inside [Chapter 33]
Pairing: Carlisle/Jasper, Jasper/James
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Characters owned by Stephenie Meyer.
Summary: The monster inside Jasper lusts for human blood. When the desire is too strong to resist, there is only one who can help. Carlisle tamed this monster once, and now he must try again.

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A Lovely way to start the day

[post_script3]

James. James. I smell trouble. Why do I get the feeling that he wants to fuck things up just for the fun of it or is it that he's someone gotten attached to Jasper and wants to play for keeps.

As for Carlisle's offer. I hope he's not just reacting to Jasper's feelings again like the last time and then only to pull away. 'Cause that would be just cruel.

Also, you my dear are a tease, but then again I forgive you because your wonderful with updates, better than any LJ writers I've ever seen.

And also because I am in love with your style of writing. I'm not just saying that. Seriously, I write myself and I find it so hard to write descriptive and narrative pieces as well as dialogue. and the way you weave them all together is flawless and fluid...
like this for example:
[I don’t know.” Carlisle sighed, touching Jasper’s face with his fingertips. “All of us have changed in the time you were gone. We can’t lose you again, Jasper. I can’t lose you again.”]

And the characterization...just wow.

Talk to you later Darling.

Re: A Lovely way to start the day

[surgical_rush]

Why are you so kind to me? You're comments are too wonderful and they make me smile and want to giggle.

Thank you for being great.

:D

xox

[you_ravish_me]

AHHH! Why so short! I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing latly. I haven't had much change to internet. But I got myself all caught up on your story and ... I'M GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT FOREVER FOR MOAR!!!! Well, ok, maybe not forever, but until the next time I get the chance to use the internet. Unless ... you have a new capter or two up by saturday ... *crosses fingers XD

[surgical_rush]

Oh that's so horrid about your cat. I'm sorry to heat that. Yeah our pets are like family, too. We had to put a dog down a while ago, she was about 11 years old and it was hard, we had a funeral for her also.

You shouldn't flatter me so much, I'll grow a massive head and fall off my chair.

lol.

But really, thank you so much.

Hope the moving is going well.

xox

Love.