I Want To Cry [Poem/Rap/Song-Fiction] ~JayWoo (By Me)
~ I Want To Cry ~
[Song-Fiction/ Rap/ Poem]
Written By Ruby KhunTaecWooChanHoSu (Me)
(Based on Brave Brothers & Jay Park’s song ‘I Want To Cry’)
[Character(s)/Pairing: Jaebeom, Wooyoung, JayWoo]
I want to cry
Because I love you so much
I want to cry
Because you’re the only one my heart wants
Not even want
There’s no word for this feeling
This aching in my ( Read more... )
[Song-Fiction/ Rap/ Poem]
Written By Ruby KhunTaecWooChanHoSu (Me)
(Based on Brave Brothers & Jay Park’s song ‘I Want To Cry’)
[Character(s)/Pairing: Jaebeom, Wooyoung, JayWoo]
I want to cry
Because I love you so much
I want to cry
Because you’re the only one my heart wants
Not even want
There’s no word for this feeling
This aching in my ( Read more... )
Anyway first, Thank You for reading & commenting BB!!!. Your my FIRST commenter, so YAYYY, I love youuu Hahahaa! <3. Yuss I totally agree, the world is so deprived of JayWoo fics these days, it's ridiculous, and yuhh I miss this pairing much too!!! *Waa Ang Ang Jing* xP. Awwh your compliments have got me smiling ear to ear Loool, Thank you!. It's my first time writing something like this too, I'm not really a poem writing kinda person, like I don't write much, but this just popped out of nowhere!. Seriously It wrote it self, before I knew it I had 4 pages written like 'Whoaa wheredid you come from' hehe. And yuhhh you're just like me, I could totally hear Jay rapping & singing this, that's why I made him the main character!, his voice is just DAMN BEAUTIFUL in the actual song 'I want to cry'!!!.
Awwh that's so sweet. Thank you for anticipating my work!!!, your comment has really made my day!, especially when I thought this poem/rap-what-sa-majig was gonna be a flop (Though I still loved it, even if it would turn out a flop xD). I'm currently working on my main KhunYoung chaptered fic & ChanHo fic & some other Spy stuff which are still drabble with BB members & Suju's Siwonie in it!. The first chapter of the Khunyoung fic will be up very soon, so hope you'll enjoy it (now I'm nervous it might not be up to standards..arghh panic! hehe). I'll work very hard to bring you guys something that you'll hopefully like..or love whatever..as long as ou don't hate it!.
Oh and hell yeahhh I'm dying for GD GD BABY BABY & T.O.P Shii' s Comeback!!!..It has been TOO LONGGG!!!..And dying even more for Big Bang's whole group Comeback!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Omo T.O.P's got Silver/White hair mann...whoaa Lol. I was watching the World premier Live of their comeback album/performances stuff and got even more EXCITED!!! (though the video kept lagging every 2 seconds) But at least we got to see them!!! YAYY..Cam't wait for the MV & Comeback performances on stage!!!. Look forward to spazzing with you when they come out sis!!!.
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ahahahah, i took your comment virginity and i like it. lol, what am i on about?
i knowwwwww, jay's voice is amazing /melts into a puddle of goo.
flop? are you kidding me? i read your poem/rap in bed on my ipod and it was so good i had to turn my computer on and comment. i swear, i always ceebs commenting, but i commented this time!
i loveeeeeee khunyoung and chanho! seriously, i'll read anything you write. do you post any fics on your journal? and don't feel pressured bb, i'm sure it's exceptional.
OMG! i didn't get to see the premier on youtube last night! but they released the songs and i couldn't be any happier. I listened to it and spazzed around on the ground because I couldn't control myself. and only TOP could work that hair. he looks like a sexy tall elf. and GD is, oh my jhflagsa.
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JAY IS JUST...NO WORDS *MELTS IN GOO WITH BB*
Omooo your compliments have got me GRINNING LIKE A MAD MAN!!! (though I'm a girl..so that makes no sense..see I can't even speak properly noww coz I'm so happy!!! haha), I'm blushing dammit! xD. Thank you sooo much Hun, that really means ALOTTT to me!!! <3..AWWWH I LOVE YOU!!!, YOU'RE TOO SWEET TO ME!!!.
OMOOO YAYYY KHUNYOUNG IS MY OTP TOO (CHANHO BEING A CLOSE 2ND LOL). AWWH DON'T WORRY I'M LIKE FINISHED WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER OF THE KHUNYOUNG FIC SO IT'LL HOPEFULLY BE UP SOON, I JUST NEED MY COMPUTER HARD DRIVE TO COME BACK COZ WE SENT IT TO REPAIR, BUT THE TECHS SAID NOTHING WILL BE REMOVED FROM THE MEMORY, SO FINGERS CROSSED OR I'M SCREWED (THOUGH I HAVE A DRAFTED, SHORTER COPY OF THE FIRST CHAPPY WRITTEN ON PAPER, BUT I IMPROVED THE COMP VERSION ALOT MOREE..BUT MY SILLY COMPUTER'S MOTHERBOARD HAD TO GO AND CRASH!!!..THE LITTLE BASTARD LMAO..I HATE YOU COMPUTER (THOUGH I LOVE YOU..). NO BB I DONT HAVE ANY FICS ON MY JOURNAL, I'M WRITING MY FIRST FANFIC NOW, BUT I'VE WRITTEN SHORT STORIES AND STUFF BEFORE, BUT COULDN'T BE BOTHERED WITH THEM. AWWH OKAYY I WON'T BE PRESSURIZED, BUT I HOPE YOU LIKE IT..I PROMISE TO MAKE IT WORTH TH WAIT, AND IF IT ISN'T I'LL JUST WORK HARDER IN THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR YOU!. I'LL TRY TO POST IT ASAP, AND MY X-MAS HOLZ IN 2 DAYS SO I'LL HOPEFULLY BE POSTING LOTS!!! <3
YUH I HEARD THE SONGS..AND THE MV'S OUT FOR 'HIGH HIGH' AND I AM JUST 'HIGH HIGH' ON THAT SONGGG LOOOL. I SCREAMED ABOUT IT ON MY JOURNAL ROFL. LOVED THE MV & GD GD BABY BABY & MY T.O.P HUBBY!!!. YOUR SOOO RIGHT, ONLY T.O.P COULD WORK THAT HAIR..DAMNNN HE LOOKED FINEEE AND MIGHTY SEXY RAPPING WHOOOO GO HUBBY!!!, AND GD WAS JUST BEYOND ADORABLE..THERE'S NO WORDS FOR IT!!! =DD. THERE'S NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW HOT THE PAIR LOOKED!!!!!!!!! AJHFJHJFHKLFHUIEYTUTNMNVMN xDD
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and i love essay replies! they're uber cool, hahah.
omg, are you an from the land down under as well? that's awesome!
and no, i'm not a creeper... i only like staring at you through your bedroom window while you sleep /shifty eyes
khunyoung is love. but recently victoria's gotten in the way and all the fics i read are angst. and they make me want to crawl in a corner and cry myself to sleep. so when you post the khunyoung fic, i am going to be the first person to comment! bitches, move outta my way. i love chanho too! actually, i love every pairing. (i love you as well baby)
oh my! i saw the mv and i wish i could grind with TOP /awkward laugh
don't judge me!
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Whooo Thank you for loving my eassay replies giirl!!!, but really you write a few lines to me, and you make my day!!!. You have a hell of a Talent! Heehee. Wait Down Under?..You mean from Australia?..Nuu I'm from the freezing Cold U.K sadly *Waa Ang Ang Jing* !!!. Wish I did though xP
Stare at me while I Sleep?..Urh *cough* that's not Creeper at all! *cough* . Wait.. does that mean I can do the same to you?!! ROFL. YAYYYY, *Does the Shuffle Dance* !!!. At least you dun sniff handkerchiefs that I borrowed from you ageees ago..now that is a Creeper!..xDD
Yuh Khunyoung is <3 , But yeah Vic gets in the way!!!. Such a cockblocker!!!. All I see is Angst too!..and my heart is too weak for this stuff dammit!!! hehehe..But I read it nonetheless (I need my khunyoung fuel!..don't Judge me!..) And then I go into Emo Mode like you *Crawl in the corner & cry ourselves to sleep together!!!* Loool. Evil KhunToria Shippers! Lmao. Whooo I'm so happy you'll be the first to comment!. I'll save the spot just for you!!! hehe. But I know it's a bit delayed coz I had problems with my comp, but I promise to try and have it up tommorow, at latest day after okayy!. But I have to say in the first chapter Khun's not in it (so don't be too disappointed!). Arghhhh Spoiler much!!!, what wrong with me!!!, I won't tell you when he comes in!. And it's my first fic, so i apologise if it's turns out Shiite!. Forgive me hun!.
Yuhhh The Mv..OHMYGOD I HAD THAT SONG ON REPLAY FOR GOD KNOWS HOW LOOONG!!!!..AND I DON'T BLAME YOU OR JUDGE YOU BB, OMG I FELT THE SAME WAY!!!. AHH BUNCH OF PERVERTS MUCH?!!! ROFL.
BTW YOUR COMMENTS JUST MAKE ME LOVE YOU MORE & MORE SIS!!! <3
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