Feb 14, 2001 11:25
ok this is a p.s. that comes before the poem/thingy. i basically want to say that i have no idea what this is but i like the title. i mainly did this to annoy comic boy.
he takes your hand
bows slightly
you curtsy
he puts his arm around your waist
you twirl in his arms
your feet never seem to touch the ground
youre floating on air
your heart beats faster
laughing gently
or not.
you sit on the bench
staring
he dances
with another
he laughs
with her
he smiles
at her
and you, you sit on the bench
staring
he turns in your direction
he slowly approaches
your heart beats faster
the tears dry up
you gaze in wonder and delight
he moves to your side
and gives his hand to another.
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Who is pronoun? [Kami]
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I like it. How would it annoy comic boy? [LainWolf]
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poetry,
writing