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Me [11:38 PM]: i need to work on my poem again
Selena [11:39 PM]: the one that gave you all that trouble?
Me [11:40 PM]: yeah
Selena [11:41 PM]: my second stanza is flat...and we don't know the relationship between the speaker and the you...
and who the you is
Selena[11:42 PM]: i thought was the whole point of the poem was that the relationship between the you and the speaker was undecided?
Me [11:43 PM]: yeah well Sarah thinks it needs to be further developed either within the second stanza or with a title...
so i think i'm gonna go with
"from a frustrated girl to her sugar daddy"
haha
Selena [11:44 PM]: i'd read it if that was the title
Me [11:45 PM]: haha
omg
hehe
whoa i can't stop laughing
Me [11:46 PM]: well thanks
Selena [11:47 PM]: hey it's the least i could do for someone who sang to me
Me [11:47 PM]: that is true
Me [11:47 PM]: and i sang it from the bottom of my heart...even
Selena [11:49 PM]: yeah exactly, so i'm glad i could make you laugh
Thanks for making me laugh :).
Selena [11:39 PM]: the one that gave you all that trouble?
Me [11:40 PM]: yeah
Selena [11:41 PM]: my second stanza is flat...and we don't know the relationship between the speaker and the you...
and who the you is
Selena[11:42 PM]: i thought was the whole point of the poem was that the relationship between the you and the speaker was undecided?
Me [11:43 PM]: yeah well Sarah thinks it needs to be further developed either within the second stanza or with a title...
so i think i'm gonna go with
"from a frustrated girl to her sugar daddy"
haha
Selena [11:44 PM]: i'd read it if that was the title
Me [11:45 PM]: haha
omg
hehe
whoa i can't stop laughing
Me [11:46 PM]: well thanks
Selena [11:47 PM]: hey it's the least i could do for someone who sang to me
Me [11:47 PM]: that is true
Me [11:47 PM]: and i sang it from the bottom of my heart...even
Selena [11:49 PM]: yeah exactly, so i'm glad i could make you laugh
Thanks for making me laugh :).