Comic: Your Heart on The Line pg 002-004

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So, the pages are under the cut~~


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Sorry for the general crappiness, I really need critiques for this comic >_> I hope I don't make any stupid grammatical error or forget anything, I was rushing to finish the 4th page before I went on my stolen holiday yesterday, I'll try harder on the next pages!! (am still looking for a suitable font, but will settle with this one for now) :/

I decided not to post this to remusxsirius until I finish at least the first part of the fic :D because I know how it feels to read unfinished comics, it sucks :(

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