The whole thing looks just as slick as it did, but is overall much more cohesive and flows much better.
Glad you left in the Nip/Tuck joke even though I said to take it out--you tightened that sequence well and the whole Lost sequence is much funnier and tighter, too.
The ending is HILARious.
I think the point of this vid is, "ash and maichan PWN EVERYONE" :D :D :D
I wrestled with the transition to Jimmy's scene, felt like it needed a "little" something before launching straight in - and that line just cracks me up, so I couldn't resist keeping it there somewhere. So glad we tightened it up - so thanks! :)
Our vid is definitely much tighter thanks to your comments. And I'm so glad you like the new ending! I wasn't sure if you'd think that the whole GG Dean watching SPN Dean confused the point even more.
I think the point of this vid is, "ash and maichan PWN EVERYONE" LOLOL, I like the sound of that :D
No, I think the end was brilliant! In fact, the more I think about it, the smarter it becomes.
It added just the right dash of meta but using the characters/actors instead of going to a fangirl place...which was the best way to maintain overall consistency. It was like a MUCH BETTER, SUPER CREATIVE, ACTUALLY HILARIOUS incarnation of what I was trying to get across with the "make them the fangirls" suggestion.
AND it was funny as hell just for its own sake. So BRAVA!!!
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I'm relieved you thought my comments were helpful and not just annoying. I really wasn't trying to be a pain in the ass. I'm thrilled that you went more to the "everything is funny" place, because I feel that decision plays to the strengths of the vid and makes everything fit together so well.
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We did what we could... :)
THANK YOU so much for your fabulous feedback.
*hugs*
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Hope you like how it turned out. Thanks again for all your help!
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The whole thing looks just as slick as it did, but is overall much more cohesive and flows much better.
Glad you left in the Nip/Tuck joke even though I said to take it out--you tightened that sequence well and the whole Lost sequence is much funnier and tighter, too.
The ending is HILARious.
I think the point of this vid is, "ash and maichan PWN EVERYONE" :D :D :D
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THANK YOU again for your fab notes.
I wrestled with the transition to Jimmy's scene, felt like it needed a "little" something before launching straight in - and that line just cracks me up, so I couldn't resist keeping it there somewhere. So glad we tightened it up - so thanks! :)
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I think the point of this vid is, "ash and maichan PWN EVERYONE"
LOLOL, I like the sound of that :D
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It added just the right dash of meta but using the characters/actors instead of going to a fangirl place...which was the best way to maintain overall consistency. It was like a MUCH BETTER, SUPER CREATIVE, ACTUALLY HILARIOUS incarnation of what I was trying to get across with the "make them the fangirls" suggestion.
AND it was funny as hell just for its own sake. So BRAVA!!!
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I'm relieved you thought my comments were helpful and not just annoying. I really wasn't trying to be a pain in the ass. I'm thrilled that you went more to the "everything is funny" place, because I feel that decision plays to the strengths of the vid and makes everything fit together so well.
This is super awesome, y'all!
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