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Apr 29, 2006 16:12

This thursady is the season finale...I'm so psyched...they had better pick it up for CW and a second season... No on with the sueage
TITLE:Bitter Sweet
link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2815467/1/
PERPETRATOR: Desirablexx3
link: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/994450/

SUMMARY:Sam sees two girls on the side of the road that seem to need help. Dean quickly turns the car over and lets them in. But, the girls seem to hold a secret extremely dangerous.:.supernatural and horror.:.Please Read and Review!
NUMBER OF BLOODY MARYS: 2 out of 5

FULL NAME: Jess and Christina (no last name for either)
SPECIES: Human so far
HAIR: Both: Black
EYES: Both: Hazel Green (um...isn't hazel a shade of BROWN?)
MARKINGS: Fair skin
POSESSIONS: Descesed parents

ORIGIN: A town where everyone is dead
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Hitch a ride with Sam and Dean
SPECIAL ABILITIES: None so far

NOTES: This isn't particulairly bad just it's bleh
SAMPLE:

"There’s a girl waving on the side of te road..she may need help”

Dean pulls over to where the girl is. Her black hair is pulled into a ponytail and she’s wearing shorts and a purple cami. She has fair skin and hazel green eyes. Dean of course starts to flirt and says,” So what’s someone like you doing here?”

She then says,” My sister and I need a ride to Indiana..”

Sam then says,” Your sister?” At that moment another girl comes over to where the other girl is and says,” I’m her sister.” The two looked almost the same. The only difference was that one was older then the other. Sam let them in the car and Dean started the car up. When they’re on the rode Dean asks,” So what’s your names?”

“I’m Jess” the older one says.

“ And I’m Christina..”the other one says.

“ So why do you need to get to Indiana?” Dean asks.

“Well, we...” immediatly when Christina starts to talk, Jess blurts out,” You’d think we were crazy if we told you so..we’re not telling.” Jess then gives Christina an evil glare as she finishes talking. “Just get us to Indiana and we’ll be alright,” Jess finishes.

20 minutes goes by in silence as the boys watch scenery of lush meadows go by. Then Dean pulls into a little town to find a gas station. The town seems very quiet and peaceful.

Jess’s face starts to pale as she sees the town and says,” C-C-Can we not g-g-go here p-p-please?”

Dean then asks,” Why not? I need some gas for the car and a bite to eat..”

“ W-w-well..it’s just not s-s-safe here,” She shivers as she speaks and then Christina starts to slide farther down in her seat.

“Are you kidding?” Sam says as he looks at the town,” You can’t get any better!”

As Sam says that, a ghostly figure of a girl comes by Jess’s side of the window. The girl looks sad with long black hair at her side. A tear comes from one of her grey eyes. Then she vanishes.

Jess then starts hysterically crying and screams,” GET OUT OF HERE NOW!”

Sam, Dean, and Christina didn’t see what Jess saw, but Christina quietly asks Jess,” Was it her?”

Jess is too busy looking out of the window as she sees a man now gripping to the other side of the window screaming something. Then he slowly walks through the car door...
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