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Ancient Words: Chapter 13: Voices

Feb 25, 2008 19:10

Author: Supernatural Mommy
Characters: Sam, Dean, OFC, OMC (child), OMC ; no pairings
Spoilers: None really, unless you've not seen Season one, to Nightmare
Warnings: P-13 now, R overall for adult themes. This chapter some religious references: Overall rated for language, violence (including non-con acts depicted with OC's and torture) hurt/ ( Read more... )

h/c, angst

Comments 2

faye_dartmouth February 28 2008, 23:31:24 UTC

Well first I was relieved that she got away--but what did she find? Why do you torture us so?!

I'm still a sucker for Sam/Bobby scenes. Especially here--Bobby trying to so hard to help him. It's so sweet.

Anyway, keep writing!

supernatrlmommy February 29 2008, 03:08:36 UTC

Aw - thanks ... I tried so hard to cut from this section (and the chapters following) but it was very difficult. Many elements build on each other so that by the end of the story you have many parallels between Sam - Dean - and our other OC's ...
I kind of am a sucker for Sam and Bobby scenes as well, gotta admit! I really modeled this little Bobby from my own ... even autistic kiddoes can empathize and feel the need to help others.
And ... torture? Surely you jest ... hm ... although since the next couple of chapters are already edited and all I suppose I could post them .... man such hard decisions!