Fanfiction: Heroes: The Author Is Not God

[superkappa]

Title: The Author Is Not God
Author: superkappa
Prompt: Challenge #14 at sylelle_chall
Characters/Pairing:Sylar/Elle (sorta), Elle/Luke (implied)
Rating: R
Summary: Hundreds of years later, Sylar meets a reincarnation of Elle. Things don’t go as planned.
A/N: This is one of the weirdest things I’ve written for a while, so I apologize for that. Thanks goes to dragynflies for

Comments

[petitebelette]

I don't know why you were nervous about this, because it's AWESOME. It's so unique and different and yet so in character. I could see a reality where Sylar is like this. And I could definitely see it ending like this.

Maybe the next Elle reincarnation will go better? :)

[superkappa]

Thank you, I'm glad they seemed in character, that's what I was really worried about.

Maybe, assuming he's less of a creeper with the next one :(

[eternal_moonie]

AWESOME story!!! Love the title too!

[superkappa]

Thank you!!

[disalae]

OMG SYLAR. CREEP. Haha.

But srsly, I really, really liked this. He's such a total creep but I mean, I guess I can see where he's coming from. Not in a condoning way, but in a Sylar way - I can see him thinking this is totally acceptable. The way Elle-iot reacts is fantastic, and I'm utterly creeped out about his transforming back when they're together in her house. Oh Sylar, I guess it's the thought that counts.

The end is great, because it gives the whole story this great circular quality. Like, she's back, but he's still her nemesis, still does everything wrong and loses her again. Ah well.

Great job!

[superkappa]

Yeah, I kind of wondered if I was going too far with having him transform back while they were together, but it seemed like such a him thing to do. It's really creepy, but to him, it's totally okay, because he's just proving how compatible they are. His logic usually doesn't make sense to anyone but him, sadly for him.

Thank you, I realized at some point there was no way he could win her in this, but I struggled with the right ending, so I'm glad you liked the one I finally settled on.

Thank you!

[lemomina]

Wow , this is so original and so good <3

Sylar being a writer made me think of Castle *lol* but ofc they are nothing alike XD

Loved how Sylar was the creepy stalker , maybe next time he will get her ( or maybe he will do something to the new hubby )

[superkappa]

Thank you.

Maybe he'll do better next time, assuming he approaches it better and in a less creepy manner.