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Fanfiction: Heroes: For Reasons Unkown

Sep 04, 2009 15:24

Title: For Reasons Unknown
Author: superkappa
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Regret for sylelle_100
Notes/Warning: If you’ve seen the end of season 3, you’re good. This was inspired by the promo for volume four where Nathan!Sylar is sitting at his desk, staring at the electricity. That is all.

( But My Heart, It Don't Beat, It Don't Beat The Way It Used To )

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Comments 26

catyuy September 4 2009, 22:33:19 UTC

Very nice.

superkappa September 4 2009, 22:43:21 UTC

Thank you.

dragynflies September 4 2009, 22:41:50 UTC

Oh -- this packed quite a punch for being so short. Lovely job :)

superkappa September 4 2009, 22:45:08 UTC

Thank you. :)

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superkappa September 5 2009, 00:18:37 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad to hear it communicated the sorrow well, I kept tweaking it, trying to get it just right.

stainofmylove September 5 2009, 00:17:34 UTC

Where is this promo?

This is great, love the questions in the parentheses. If only, Katie, if only.

superkappa September 5 2009, 00:21:29 UTC

It's for like five seconds of the promo. Go figure that that's the part that sticks with me.

Thank you. Paratheses allowed me to show the confusion without eating up too many words. And you know me, I write fic to see the stuff the show will never give me.

di_elle September 5 2009, 00:30:31 UTC

You took 2 seconds and wrote an entire story, saying so much about Sylar in just 100 words. Great take on the prompt!

superkappa September 5 2009, 00:37:23 UTC

You know me, I see something I could take as Syelle, even for two seconds, I'll do it. Thank you so much!

di_elle September 5 2009, 00:45:51 UTC

I must say, your take on the prompt is really original, too :D

superkappa September 5 2009, 00:50:02 UTC

Well, originally I almost did something on the beach scene, but I've done that before. So I wanted to go a different way :D