Comments | superkappa: Fanfiction: Heroes: Devil In A Miniskirt (Chapter 5)

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Fanfiction: Heroes: Devil In A Miniskirt (Chapter 5)

Feb 05, 2009 02:49

( You've Got Gremlins In Your Blood And Demons In Your Bed )

Comments 14

midasu February 5 2009, 11:26:38 UTC

I love this story. Great chapter. I love how they are trying to manipulate each other and don't know when the other is lying or telling the truth.

superkappa February 5 2009, 11:36:06 UTC

Thank you, it's so much fun writing their battle of wills. I think trust is one of their biggest issues, and it's fun emphasizing that.

faded_facade February 5 2009, 15:05:14 UTC

Man, I love this story and how they interact with each other. Trying to hit each other where it hurts the most and yet realizing their own weaknesses at the same time.

superkappa February 5 2009, 18:03:36 UTC

Thank you, I really enjoy writing them in this story.

lemomina February 5 2009, 15:27:26 UTC

Update , YAY
So now my 2 favorites Psychos went from teasing each other to trying to manipulate each other , WOW
I Love your story , please keep updating ^_^

ps: i will friend you , okay ?!

superkappa February 5 2009, 18:07:42 UTC

I'll definitely keep updating. This is probably my favorite of the two WIPs I'm working on.

Sure!

catyuy February 5 2009, 15:28:22 UTC

Great chapter.

superkappa February 5 2009, 18:14:27 UTC

Thank you!

di_elle February 5 2009, 20:39:30 UTC

I call the chapter "1-0" for Elle... :)

“God, for a serial killer you really are a baby, you know that, don’t you?

LOL!

but in the end Sylar discovered Elle's soft spot... mmm

funny chapter again! :)

superkappa February 5 2009, 22:29:55 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :)