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Fanfiction: Heroes: The Point Of It All (Chapter 11)

Jan 23, 2009 20:09

Title: The Point Of It All (Chapter 11)
Pairing/Characters: Sylar/Elle, Angela, Hatian, others.
Rating: NC-17 (For chapter 4 and 8)
Summary: Elle is brought back to life to serve a purpose for the Company, but is it a service she wants to perform? Does she even have a choice? AU after 3x12 "Our Father". Chapter 11: Sylar and Elle make their way to ( Read more... )

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Comments 23

catyuy January 24 2009, 04:28:49 UTC

Very good........poor Haitian.
Poor Peter, his mother truly is behind everything.

superkappa January 24 2009, 04:30:31 UTC

She really kind of is.

ateenwriter January 24 2009, 04:31:00 UTC

“I’m always ready to raise hell.”
lol very fitting.
Also loved Elle just shooting the Haitian always wondered why people didn't just try that.

superkappa January 24 2009, 04:34:54 UTC

Right? Makes enough sense to me.

faded_facade January 24 2009, 04:35:45 UTC

You'd think the Haitian would actually keep watch over Gablar and Elle and not let himself get shot so easily. And oh Peter, such the eternal optimist as always. The show has made him such a Gary Stu, lol.

I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

superkappa January 24 2009, 04:39:57 UTC

Well, in the Hatian's defense, he was probably focusing on controlling both Elle and Sylar's powers, that probably takes alot out of him. Peter is always the optimist, it's part of his charm.

Thank you :)

catyuy January 24 2009, 04:42:25 UTC

Don't forget, this is the same Peter who thought he could fly because of dreams, the possiblility of his foot hovering for a split second and a painting. Then proceeds to jump off a VERY tall building to test it.......Peter's always been a dreamer and a bit of a dummy.

dragynflies January 24 2009, 06:01:39 UTC

OMG they shot the Haitian.

Poor Haitian

I am loving this!!!!!

superkappa January 24 2009, 06:18:54 UTC

Poor Hatian indeed :c

I'm glad you like it so well! I was a little nervous about this chapter.

acinogan January 24 2009, 07:49:45 UTC

i do so love bonnie & clyde-type sylar & elle. i just read the whole thing in one sitting, and i am now super excited to read what happens next! angela deserves whatever she gets, if you ask me. good job writing!

superkappa January 24 2009, 07:50:34 UTC

I'm glad you liked it so well. It was alot of fun to write!

acinogan January 24 2009, 08:02:43 UTC

yep, it makes me want to go dirty up my own versions of them! you know, in the good sense of the word "dirty."

superkappa January 24 2009, 08:11:58 UTC

Go, I totally approve of any sort of dirting up of them!

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