Finally, as I promised Amie, better late than never, here is your surprise.

[superfixx]

#6 The Royal We.  Write a first person plural narrative + #115 Maps.  I can't tell you the rules on this one or you'll know why certain things are in there.  500+ words.

504

We want you to know this was not murder. We didn't single her out and decide we were going to have an execution, or an assassination. She did this to herself.

Today is the

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wow.

[amieinstereo]

Fuck yes! i love this. It made me so happy.
THIS IS AWESOME: ::Later, we would find out this girl is what is called; 504. Three cute numbers for a politcally correct way for the school board to say: fucking crazy.::
It makes me so glad that i'm just the hissing girl's 504 case manager and NOT her actual teacher. i met the hissing girl and she was so weird (go figure). After everything i said, she replied, "Okay." Even WHILE i was talking, she was all "Okay. Okay. Okay. Okay." Like a creepy little robot. And her hair looks like the well-dweller in The Ring.
It's neat that they CALL the girl "504." It's like 007, but way more politically incorrect.
The beginning is awesome too- especically when you look at it/think about it after reading the ending. It's the perfect exposition. ::We want you to know this was not murder. We didn't single her out and decide we were going to have an execution, or an assassination. She did this to herself.
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And this too- ::If you could hear us right now, you would hear a static sound.:: It's so perfect for describing that air of weirdness from high school that we all knew and loved...

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[amieinstereo]

p.s. i wish i'd been able to read this sooner!!!

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[superfixx]

Hey, thanks for the awesome things you said. Really though, you should credit yourself for it. The whole things stemmed from when you so aptly described her as committing "Social Suicide" when you first talked about hissing girl. The suicide commment is what made the first sentence that you liked, and gave it a framework for a beginning and end. Essentially all I did was steal your idea :-)

So, keep talking about work poetically, and I'll keep making stories in your honor.

P.S. Were gald to have you back in the world of 1's and 0's. It started getting lonely here without you.

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[amieinstereo]

Anytime. You deserved all the nice things being said! i don't credit myself for anything except for being the 504 master- and don't you forget it! If anything i say gives anyone ideas, more power to them. i can never think of anything worth writing about. And why's the English teacher GOTH, huh?

Ah, i'm glad to BE back. Imagine me skimming 750 entries to make up for everything i'd missed... puh-the-tic.

i'm trying to go to bed early tonight. it's so hard waking up early when it's cold outside.