Patrick
I stare at him with over welming joy, cant belive his hair is glistening the way it is glistening, its almost amazing, not qite though, ive used about 5 commas in the last sentence, oops theres another. he has a copper toned necklace and and a quiksilvershirt on with jeans and shoes.. he giggles with desire, and i laugh in an indepth...........