Secrets of the Throne

[supercutefoxy]

TITLE: Secrets of the Throne

Fifth month, year ‘48

He was only eighteen when she first laid eyes on him. He was tall with skin tanned from the constant sun exposure his people had to endure and hair bleached almost white by the same sun. His eyes were what caught her attention the most. They were sharp green and could pierce a person to their

Comments

[lovelylytton]

Wow! This is a very original idea, and I like it! You explored it well, especially the pressure the queen is under to not let the magical line die with her and her husband.

[supercutefoxy]

Why thank you! ^_^
Giselle was tough to pin down. I wanted her ambition to blind her to morals but not to make her a complete bitch. After all Kunzite had to see something in her. ^_^

[venusorbit1]

I DID WHAT? WOW?!! I never thought my innocent comment would turn into this!! And it WORKS, i can totally believe the circumstances and how getting pumped and dumped by the queen at an early age would turn him bitter. I love that it's true to life how 18 year olds are in uh, bed: quick on the trigger.

Anyway, great job! I'm glad I could help ;)

[supercutefoxy]

I bow down to your awesome plot bunny inspiring prowess.

^_^ Glad that you think it works, that was one of the major things I kept tinkering with.

[charliechaplin2]

OMG BIGGER TWIST!!!!!!!!!! KUNZITE IS HIS FATHER?! DFJH AGH GJAS S SAY WHAT NOW?!

[supercutefoxy]

Blame V. Its all her fault. The thought had never crossed my mind till she was all ' Hey! Kunzite is old enough to be Endy's Dad!'

And, well, how could I ignore that?