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Early Mornings and Late Nights Under Overcast Sky (Jensen/Jared RPS) -- 4/? (WIP)

Mar 25, 2006 11:25

Title: Early Mornings and Late Nights Under Overcast Sky
Characters/Pairing: Jensen Ackles / Jared Padalecki
POV: Jensen Ackles
Author's Notes: It’s fiction. That means it’s not real, folks Jensen and Jared are real people. So is Eric Kripke. The show “Supernatural” is a real TV show on the WB11. If anything else in this is real, I wasn’t ( Read more... )

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lora_nykole March 25 2006, 18:26:37 UTC

OMG i knew it ...well no i didnt but i thought it might be something similar ...i was thinkin she caught Jared jerkin off and moaning Jensens name or sumthin ...but that ..that was awesome !! and now that he knows !!! :D:D ....MORE ...more now !!! lol

sxeraven March 25 2006, 19:08:29 UTC

hehe... it just sorta ... came to me when I was writing it.

So of course now it's Jensen/Jared fic but it looks like there might be some problems along the way. :)

lora_nykole March 25 2006, 19:14:33 UTC

oh noooo!! no problems ...**whimpers** i want them to be happy ! lol ...i know im such a sap ...:P really lovin it though ...cant wait for more lol

avid_slacker March 25 2006, 20:37:57 UTC

I can't wait to see what comes next.

sxeraven March 25 2006, 21:27:27 UTC

Eventually. *L*
I'm somewhat surprised at how this seems to be writing itself.

mirichan March 25 2006, 21:58:33 UTC

I knew it... was rather obvious it would be the reason both from her acting up when Jen called and Jared's reactions up to now.

My only beef with this chapter? When did Jared put his pants on? He's in his boxers then he takes his coat and exits the trailer... wish I was the waitress :P

sxeraven March 25 2006, 22:26:29 UTC

Bwahahaha! yes I think I should fix that... thank you for noticing! Though yes, I think I'd like to be the waitress also. *L*

jellicle March 25 2006, 22:06:01 UTC

I knew it was something to that effect when she answered his call the first time and reacted so horribly. I also knew it was exactly this the reason why Jared was acting so weird.

sxeraven March 25 2006, 22:27:48 UTC

hehe... it's amusing how you guys saw it coming but I wasn't sure if I was going to do that or not. *L*

Hehehehe... :) Glad you're enjoying though, and glad it does prelude itself.

pixie_pan March 26 2006, 01:41:47 UTC

Much love for this so far. Looking forward to more!

sxeraven March 26 2006, 03:32:47 UTC

Awwww thankee. :)
Hopefully it won't be too long before I get the fifth chapter up......unfortuantely it looks a bit short and more of a cliffy. :(