grampa - first draft, criticism welcome

Sep 25, 2005 15:18

"grampa's kiss"

tearing silver foil
tiny pink fingers grip
the prize! white paper,
blue ink, oh!
Grampa Gerry! Grampa Gerry!
What's it say?

and he'd read our fortunes,
tell us the wisdom
on these alien flags,
planted by sages,
that only said 'hershey.'
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