[FIC] The Unforgettable Night

[sunshinelovers]

Title: The Unforgettable Night
Pairings: YunJae, Jae? and slight MinHo
Length: around 3000 words
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance, Fluff? Crack? SMUT!
Disclaimer: I really want to own them; heres the deal: I'll take Jae and give the rest back? Would that be alright? haha!
Author's Note: Due to everyones' request again I decided to write the last part

Comments

[chai_tea88]

changmin was the one who was betrayed by the yunjae, yet here he was, portrayed as the evil one and probably being hated by all yunjae lovers.

sigh....

i give up.

(the jaemin smut was srsly hot though. min took his revenge, and rightly so.)

[sunshinelovers]

sorry, i had to make you give up! ='(

[chai_tea88]

i only gave up on the cheating couple in your story. jusy wished the victim wouldnt end up being the villain instead, though.

and though i know you are mainly a yunjae writer, i think you should write more jaemin smut. i like yunjae, but i dont think jaemin is nasty at all. i actually like both pairings. the smut was the most enjoyable part of the chapter for me. (not that it was smut, but because min was taking his revenge on his friends who betrayed him)

i am so evil to yunho, yet i love him best. >:/

[moon1084]

but i dont think jaemin is nasty at all

dont get me wrong i meant as in the rape part. he did rape jae right. thats why i saw him as evil.

[chai_tea88]

eh?? but jaejoong wasn't raped. min took revenge by making jaejoong enjoy their sex so much in front of yunho, and showed yunho that jaejoong couldnt even tell it wasn't him. there was no rape in this fic.

because...

Changmin kept on thrusting into Jae Joong while pumping his cock. Jae Joong felt like he was at the edge of heaven.

and oh, i wasn't referring to your comment. i just saw it now. :) it was a general comment.

[moon1084]

making him "THINK" it was yunho is rape. i am sure jae wudnt have given min consent if he knew it wasnt yunho right lol omg i am pms-ing ignore me

[sunshinelovers]

LOL! hahaha, so its sorta half-half rape?

I mean, like chai_tea88 said, it was revenge to make Yunho watch them do it, but yes Jae wouldn't have given Min consent...so yea...=S

[sunshinelovers]

ah, the cheating couple...*whew* and i felt totally bad about pairing jaemin together...

you liked the part of min taking revenge? haha! i was hoping some people would like it since it seemed like Min was being unfair to!

I love Yunho too..I shouldn't have made him so bad! =(