Fic: Happily Ever After...? - Chapter 10/14

Jun 21, 2009 09:12

Title: Happily Ever After...?
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Pairing: Alex/Olivia
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The characters of Law & Order do not belong to me.  No infringement intended and no profit will be made from their use.
Spoilers: Loss
Summary: After the events of "Loss", Olivia is given a second chance to make things right...
Author's Note: Set a year after ( Read more... )

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kellty June 21 2009, 13:40:14 UTC
Wow what a cliffhanger! So unfair but i love this story, it awesome. Def cant wait for the next chapter!

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sunsetwriter June 22 2009, 03:43:49 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting! Next chapter on the way...

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zephyr_tempest June 21 2009, 14:15:46 UTC
"Dark complected" - dark complexion?

Other than that...adore the story so far. Caught up on it tonight. Love the way you've written Alex's new outlook on life - beats what the producers did with her character x10. Although...that could be the flannel shirt talking ;)

Definately looking forward to the next chapter.

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sunsetwriter June 22 2009, 03:50:10 UTC
I've heard that word all my life, so I was a little surprised when MS Word tagged it as misspelled. So, I looked it up and Merriam-Webster tells me it's an "Americanism" and non-existant in British English. Since it seems to be associated with southern American writers, I left it in.

Glad you like the story. I figure pretty much anything beats what the producers have done lately!

And I never knew how popular a flannel shirt would be! :-)

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curiousleigh June 21 2009, 14:19:16 UTC
*squee* Always keep 'em wanting more!

Great chapter and excellent cliffhanger.

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sunsetwriter June 22 2009, 03:50:46 UTC
Thanks! More on the way...

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agentb81 June 21 2009, 14:31:28 UTC
I'm a little suspicious of good ol' Jonathan, but that's probably just me! I'm intrigued to find out what this series of events is, ok, scrap intrigued, I'm desperate lol x

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sunsetwriter June 22 2009, 04:03:42 UTC
OK, since you're desperate... I'll post the next chapter tonight. Actually I have a crazy work day tomorrow and don't know when I'll have a chance to post it then.

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carinjo June 21 2009, 15:46:16 UTC
cliffhangers are cool if there are regular updates. that last bit was horrible, but i know we won't have to wait too long to find out what happens next!

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sunsetwriter June 22 2009, 04:04:48 UTC
Thanks for reading. Next update coming up...

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