Fading (/Falling Insde the Black) ~ Challenge 115: Parents

Jul 18, 2009 01:37



Becker’s pleading “Go away” can’t keep Helen out of his flat, neither can the unexpected presence of a handsome, tight-lipped man and a woman whose soft beauty is mirrored in her son. Seeing Becker’s cool exterior crumble in the father’s presence Helen meets the sharp look with an unreadable smile, but the empty tenderness in the woman’s eyes ( Read more... )

captain becker, no love no glory, helen cutter, drabble, falling inside the black

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nietie July 18 2009, 08:09:30 UTC
Wow!
You manage to bring OC's to life so well!
Awesome drabble. *hugs back*

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talliw July 18 2009, 09:21:05 UTC
OMG
Growing up with such parents had to be horrible.
It's no wonder he's falling for Helen. She shows him probably more real feelings than his parents have ever done.

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telperion_15 July 18 2009, 16:11:27 UTC
*meeps*

Very nice.

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lukadreaming July 19 2009, 12:30:33 UTC
Eek! It's a really vivid image of his parents.

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bella_farfalla July 19 2009, 16:16:58 UTC
Yikes, awkward much. I don't know if I feel more sorry for Helen or Becker...

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