Yay First Rec

Oct 17, 2003 08:41

Bear with me on the Review, I've never really done this before so I might give away too much of the plot or something. Feel free to comment and let me know, I'd love suggestions for improvement.

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-Go to http://inkstain.slashcity.net
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Warmth of Life by Becky

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Snape/Older Harry
Descrip: Harry begins to feed Vampire Snape and a relationship is formed.


This is a long story, which I always prefer. I found it from another recommendation page I'm working my way through. It's a sweet story in a bit of a twisted way since Snape is a Vampire and it deals heavily with that. Lots of biting of course. *grins* But I loved the take on vampirism, the care the author took with some of the details of it. I haven't read many vampfics but I still think this is original and I really enjoyed it. I also enjoyed how the affection in the relationship slowly formed.

The major drawbacks are spelling and grammer, though it wasn't bad enough to render the story unreadable. Also I didn't like how the author handled the confrontation at the end, it was just a bit to easy for my tastes. Whenever I have a big fight with my mother-figure I don't get by so easily, and I really don't think it'd be so easy for Harry either to get by Mrs. Weasley who always seems like a force in and of herself in the books. On that note I think characterizations were off just a bit for most of the characters but not too bad.
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