Help!

[sunnyd_lite]

Hey there is anyone bored tonight and wants to have the first peak (aka beta) a 1600 word original story. Rating is G. I need someone to check to see if it makes sense to someone not me. I need to post it by 7 am tomorrow as I'm lucky enough to be heading to a cottage.

Any takers?

It's called McGillvery's Mystical Mirror Emporium and is urban magic-ish. Original fic, again.