Early Christmas present

Dec 21, 2010 20:34

Title: Early Christmas present (One-Shot)
Pairing: Hanchul
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Heechul misses Hankyung and gets his present early...
A/N: Okay... This is my first smut... or it's trying to be one... So comments and good advices are wellcome (as they always are ^^)

Early Christmas Present )

rating: nc-17, pairing: heechul/hankyung

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ukekyu December 21 2010, 18:55:03 UTC
SPOT ;)

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sung_gi December 21 2010, 18:59:58 UTC
SPOT for ukekyu ^^

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ukekyu December 21 2010, 20:48:48 UTC
Thank you 8D <3

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ukekyu December 21 2010, 19:16:13 UTC
The smut blinded me @__@<3
It was good~ 8;D

There were some things here and there that need to be fixed, but overall it's good :)

However, I would not like to see Heechul top Hangeng, not at all, thank you very much xD!! (and I don't like the idea of Hangeng cheating either >:D)

But nonetheless, good.

<3

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sung_gi December 21 2010, 19:26:39 UTC
I think so too ^^
Thanks for reading and commenting :DD

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sweetichigo227 December 22 2010, 07:19:33 UTC
With Henry?!?! ㅠ_ㅠ ah but Heechul was happy thats all that matters (´▽`)I'm sure he loved his present o(^_^)o

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sung_gi December 22 2010, 08:29:55 UTC
I think so too ^^
Thanks for reading and commenting :D

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mjaku December 22 2010, 18:06:47 UTC
YAY! I survived from my computer quarantine XD

BUT.THAT.WAS.FREAKING.AWESOME...!!!! LOL I cracked to the end "I'll top you both tomorrow"..*BURST*

If we don't talk before christmas, I'll say MERRY CHRISTMAS!! <333 a bit early xD

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sung_gi December 22 2010, 18:11:49 UTC
Thank you honey!!! <3

And I know it won't happen... If we don't talk before Christmas eve, I'll call you <3 ;D

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mimoiikit143 January 7 2011, 16:29:12 UTC
Wait, WHAT>:? O_o
Did Geng really do it with Henry? Haha. Tell me.
My head was getting all fuzzy with the smut there! xD
Owww. Totally sexy imma tell you that ;)
Haha. Great work on this fic. xD

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sung_gi January 7 2011, 17:05:39 UTC
Thank you!!!! :DD
Haha, didn't I write it clearly enough? XD I felt kinda guilty to make Geng with innocent Henry, but I still wrote it xD

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mimoiikit143 January 7 2011, 17:06:50 UTC
Ugh! So they did do it! >w<
Uwaaaaa. i dunno who to pity innocent Henry or smutty hyung Geng? haha.

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blackheart_lies April 25 2013, 20:12:41 UTC
"I'll top you both tomorrow"

That line!!! Yes!! Perfect!
This was good, the sex was HOT *fans self*

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sung_gi May 11 2013, 13:27:04 UTC
Omo! Thank you!!! *joins to fan you*

...I had already forgotten where that line was xD

Thank you for reading and commenting!! :DD

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