Title: A Different Twiligt Story, chapter 4
Pairing: TeukChul (past!KangTeuk and past!HanChul)
Rating: PG-15 (overall)
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veltanaWarning: vampires, drugs
Word count: 5800 words
Summary: "I saw him. I swear I saw him. And he saw me. But no one else saw him and when I blinked he was gone. Like the smoke from my cigarette, he disappeared into the air. I'm
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More more more!!! :)
You have to post these chapters more often or at least let me read them while you're writing ;)
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Thanks for the comment hun <3
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Mostly I'm too tired and have no inspiration :P But when I do have an inspiration, I write like there's no tomorrow XD and you know that ;))
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Really, this is my most favorite chapter so far.. More truth and Heechul's feeling are revealed in such alluring way through Chul's writing. That's just so cool!
But there seems to be still many mysteries left, eh? Especially about the last paragraph of Chul's writing, something in it make me thrilled with more curiosity.
And about Hangeng, did I miss something or do you intentionally make him like a bad guy here? (especially after what he's done to Teuk) Geng and Chul seem to be having unsettled problem or something.
Hmm update soon, please~
And sorry if my comment is too incoherently long :)
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And thank you^^ It makes me really happy to hear you liked it^^
I wanted to leave so questions hanging ;)) Otherwise the fic wouldn't be exiting anymore... But you will get all the answers later on, promise :D
You haven't missed anything :D And I think you'll find the answer to your question in the next chapter x))
I'll try my best, as always... :))
Thank you for reading and commenting, and the longer comment the more I like it ^^
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the up-side about betaing your stuff is that I'm the first one to read them and still, when I see your update I get so excited xDxD
You know I love this series! It's so awesome! :DDD soooo when can I get the next chapter? :OO ;)
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You have no idea how happy your comment makes me!!! I've never thought that could happen XD I've never thought my fic could be that good...even though it's my favorite so far :D (I hope the second fic I'm gonna write will be even better kkk)
I'm not sure about that..... I have to write the 14th chapter of PMP before the 5th chap of ADTS... :P
And I need to find time to write!! I have to read 2 books...actually I got the 3rd book today AND IT'S IN SWEDISH AND I DON'T UNDERSTAND A THING!! -.-''
THANK YOU FOR YOUR AWESOME COMMENT AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU!
<3
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anyway.
it's getting more interesting.
go heeteuk!
mycommentissolameicanteven......immagoandhidenow.
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Thank you ^^
for reading and commenting :D
anditdoesn'tmatterwhatkindacommentyouwrite...themainthingisthatyoucomment ;))
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I love your comment XDXD
Thanks honey<3
.......and I'll try my best but you know I have 3 f*cking books that I must read...... and today I'm gonna sit on our couch, listen to music and f*cking read all day.... -.-''
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