Practice makes perfect, ch 11

Jun 09, 2011 23:03


Title: Practice makes perfect, chapter 11
Paring: Haehyuk, side Teukchul and Sibum
Rating: PG ~ NC-17 (PG-15 for this chapter)
Beta: veltana


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genre: angst, rating: pg-15, fic: practice makes perfect, pairing: eunhyuk/donghae

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sung_gi June 9 2011, 20:14:19 UTC
Spot for hxcangel92 <3

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hxcangel92 June 9 2011, 21:16:01 UTC
Hihi! I'm still here! :3
I got sooo happy when I saw your update! 8D
I DON'T LIKE HARA OR SOO MAN!
She is a slut and he is too controlling of Hae's and his mother's lives L_L
Poor Hae was stuck indoors all day and couldn't even leave with Hyukkie ;A;
But I am happy he told Hyukkie Hara was his cousin XD
B-but no bbq party?!?!?! I was looking forward to it!
Hmm..maybe something else will happen? ;)
/waits patiently for more~
<<<333

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sung_gi June 10 2011, 07:20:49 UTC
There will be something else.... I promise there will be something... x)))
No one likes them :'DDDD I don't like them either XD But they are characters that I can't just throw away....you have to bear with them ;D

Thank you for reading and commenting once again <3
I'll update my TeukChul fic first so it might take a while before I update this one... I hope there will be rainy days when I won't be laying in the sun all day (like I've been doing past 3 days) ^^

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sung_gi June 9 2011, 20:15:01 UTC
Spot for undeadvampire <3

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undeadvampire June 17 2011, 11:02:55 UTC
<3 Thanks for a good chapter! I still follow it, and I love it!! It's a really good idea you have with this story! Don't think it's boring, because it's NOT!!! :D I hope to see more of this story soon. I check daily to see if there's a new chapter. Sorry I haven't had time to read it before now, and comment on it earlier.

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sung_gi June 17 2011, 13:15:04 UTC
I was starting to wonder where you were... :''DD
I'm really glad you think that :) At first I was like "WOW I GOT AN AMAZING IDEA!" and then I got a bit bored with it... but now I've found that enthusiasm again^^ I have almost written the whole next chapter ;D ...but I can't update it in a week since we're going to Portugal :) So you need to wait a it ;D
It's okay^^ The main thing is that you read it ^^
Thank you dear <3

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undeadvampire June 17 2011, 13:18:03 UTC
I'm right here :P
Yeah, I had the total same with my story xD I have just updated today after like a week or such without updating... That's a long time for me xD
NICE!!! Can't wait for it. ^^ Even though I have to :P ^^ Have a nice trip to Portugal! :D Hope you'll enjoy it.

You're welcome! :D

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sung_gi June 9 2011, 20:15:58 UTC
Spot for mimistetsuki <3
...joka ei oo vieläkään kommentoinu mulle vaikka lupas *mulkoilua* xD

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mimistetsuki June 12 2011, 09:29:51 UTC
AAA SORIII!! livejorma on vähä jääny... >_<

MUUTTTT AAH TOI VITUN LEHMÄ, HARA-HORO!

ja hyuk...wuuuutt!?!?!??! mikä toi tekstari oli olevinaan?

miks stondiksen äiti on tollanen?! kiristääks soo man sitä?!?!?!!?!? joka tapaukses perseeseen mokoma gigolo soo man. soo soo mies!
(ja lukitsis sen fakin vessan!)

sytämmeen sattuu ku lukee tätä. mä tekisin kyl itsarin jos oisin stondis!!!

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sung_gi June 12 2011, 10:16:52 UTC
Mie huomaan xD
EIHÄN NE OO NE KAKSOSPOJAT JOKKA ON VIENY SUT POIS TÄÄLTÄ?! *lisää mulkoilua*

LOL! Kaikki sanoo suunnilleen noin xD
Vähän eri sanoin, mut viesti on sama *hahaha*
Mun pitää kohta miettiä ihan vakavissani et pitäiskö mun muuttaa juonen kulkua, mut.... luultavasti oon liian laiska tekeen sitä *kekeke*

Ei kiristä :''P
Mut Haen äiti ei vaan voi sulattaa sitä et hänen poikansa suuteli toista poikaa x)

LMAO... Et ikinä arvaa mistä tuo vessajuttu on tullu mun päähän XD
...mut sanotaanko et oon ollu useampaan otteeseen samassa tilanteessa ku Hae... mulla ei oo isäpuolta eikä oo kukaan mun perheen jäsen joka jättää vessan lukittematta mut... No joo, jos mie en nyt kuitenkaan kertois ihan kaikkea XD Muuta ku et mulla on omakohtasia kokemuksia *hahaha*

ÄLÄ EES SANO TOLLASIA!!!
Kyl tää tarina päättyy onnellisesti :''DD
<3

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mimistetsuki June 12 2011, 15:17:54 UTC
noo.....kyl ne nyt vähään ...ne kaksoset..joo.... >/////////<

tee niinku suunnittelit! tai niinku haluut :D

AAAAA!!! *blondi* mokoma äiti!!!!

x'DDD no siis mul on käyny sillee et ku oon ollu ite yhen sirkuksen käymäläs ni se lukko petti ja pikkupoika avas sen ove napposen auki. kuulin ku se äiti huus "älä avaa se on varattu, punanen näkyy". mut ei se kakara totellu. ja sit tos vähä aika sit ni mun kaverilla ni olin pesemäs hampait rintsikois (ala osa oli ONNEKS puettu) ja sit se lukko oli hassu (et siit ei sisäl oleva nää onks lukos vai ei) et käänsi sitä niin et oletin et se oli lukos..mut se sit ei ollu ja sit se japski uusseelantilainen Sam tulee ja avaa sen oven. >_<
mutta on sitä kokemusta toisinki päin :D

jee onnelliset loput <333

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yeobo01 June 9 2011, 21:49:02 UTC
silent reader has been given the power of speach xD

lol joke ^^ .. i just wanted to say that i really like your fics !!
the story is really good :D when i read the chapters i get so into it that afterwards i'm still upset at how hara and donghaes mother are acting ^.^ yay i'm officially weird (;

keep up the good work :D hwaiting~ ((:

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sung_gi June 10 2011, 07:22:49 UTC
*haha* I love when silent readers open their mouths :''DDD

That's only a good thing, right? *hahah*
I'm glad I've managed to write something you think about even after you've read it ^^

I'll try my best^^
Thank you for reading and finally commenting :DD

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yeobo01 June 13 2011, 17:17:12 UTC
yes very good ^.^ don't be worried

i will continue to follow your entries ((:
waiting for updates ~ :D

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sung_gi June 13 2011, 17:38:21 UTC
*writing the next chapter even though I said I'd write the next chapter to my other fic* X))

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hyukkieaddict June 9 2011, 22:52:06 UTC
i suer i have read you promised the eunhae moment but where D': /sobbing

hara can you just oh crap and why hyuk's text is so short and cold D:

thanks for sharing!

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sung_gi June 10 2011, 07:26:19 UTC
Did I!? I'm so sorry!
There will be HaeHyuk moments but... I can't tell, it would spoil too much x))

I know, but once again, I can't tell you :''DDDD You'll know it when you read the next chapter^^
I hope there will be rainy days when I can be on computer and update soon.... ;D But first I will update my TeukChul fic, so this fic won't be updated next week xD

Thank you for reading and commenting, again^^

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