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sunflower_petal

You're My Endless Love

Oct 18, 2007 11:26

A/N: Part 3/3. It’s a continuation of “ Heechul; Master of Hidden Emotions” (which was a continuation of “ It’s Hard For You and Me”. It’s really lame. I think my writing got worse. Sorry~ >w< Or maybe it’s just because I can’t write fluff. o__o

You’re My Endless Love

They obviously still had feelings for each other. This war over Kibum was just a ( Read more... )

!fic: super junior, pairing: heemin

Comments 23

crimeis October 18 2007, 01:36:23 UTC

Awe, that was the cutest ending ever! I really enjoyed reading. Haha but Heechul, he is just way too cute and Heechul is so Heechul. Loved it. It was really interesting to have read a switched personality. It was fun and I enjoyed it really much. Haha and the second to last line, "I really like you, Lee Sungmin. You better not hurt me, okay?"- Haha yeahhh coming from Heechul. Haha <333! This was absolute love. I'm looking forward for more of your writings. Thank you! ^-^

sunflower_petal October 18 2007, 01:44:30 UTC

Aww... you're so sweet~ thank you so much for reading (and liking!)♥ I wrote a short drabble thing last night that I might post soon if you want to read it? lol~ it's VERY short.

crimeis October 18 2007, 01:46:30 UTC

I would really like to read it. It's nice to read other author's works. I've been so consumed that I needed a break and your fiction really cured me from the fiction blues. Lol. <333!

sunflower_petal October 18 2007, 03:04:49 UTC

Hee~ I'm glad that it did that! :D♥

Here is that short HeeMin thing that I was talking about. ^w^

guilty_amethyst October 18 2007, 03:02:04 UTC

OMG that is so sweet and cute~! ♥ Wai, I loved how this ended~! 8D

I personally thought it was getting better? ^^;; I think that it became more... organized? Idk... :( But for a first fic it's REALLY good. 8D I know I'd totally fail. xP

♥♥♥

sunflower_petal October 18 2007, 03:08:29 UTC

AWW THANK YOU AMII♥ -lots of hearts for you- I'm glad you liked how it ended; I felt gay for making it sound so... bleh. I mean, I love sweet things, but I find it hard to write because I end up disgusting myself and I feel really ew. Which is probably why I prefer angst lol.

Hehe, I'm sure you'd do well. ^w^

♥

guilty_amethyst October 18 2007, 03:37:24 UTC

♥ ^o^

Haha, it wasn't that bad. Really. ^^ Angst is nice too, except when it stays too long AFTER the end. :(

Haha, idk. xD I'm not great at starting and FINISHING a fic. xP

sunflower_petal October 18 2007, 03:51:32 UTC

Hehe, "angst is nice"? Angst isn't nice, Amii. ;D But I'm glad you thought it wasn't. I was a bit sceptical about posting this because just yeah. =/ -scared- but it turned out okay. ^w^

Go, Amii, go! I believe in you! 8D

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chocochinno October 18 2007, 07:04:10 UTC

and here i thought chullie will say 'sungmin, will u marry me?' >>> he certainly acted like that XD
but both of them are so cute <3333 i love how it ends~~

btw, i noticed you can change your icon without changing the ones before, how did you do that?

sunflower_petal October 18 2007, 07:12:38 UTC

Lol... I'm glad you liked it!♥

AND~ on the when you reply, there should be something above the text box which says "picture to use:" and then a drop down option next to it. Then just pick a picture that you previously will have uploaded. ^w^ <- I hope that made sense. >w<;;

chocochinno October 18 2007, 08:46:56 UTC

yeah, after playing hide & seek plus snarl & cry finally~~ though i pity the other members for putting up with the game for such a lng time (especially kibummie XD)

*blinks* oh....i didn't notice that *kick myself* thank you!!!

sunflower_petal October 18 2007, 10:40:52 UTC

Haha, I feel so askfabdkj after writing this. I love reading happy things, but I hate writing it. Kibum... I used only because I originally was going to use Geng, but I couldn't bring myself to do it (I don't like him very much).

And no problem. ;)

aayachi October 18 2007, 14:43:36 UTC

so cute!!

haha i thought they would marry each other or smth, from the song xD

sunflower_petal October 19 2007, 00:22:35 UTC

XD♥ I should have made them marry each other, shouldn't I? But... that's too balkcsfjabd for me to write. It probably would've ended up being something like:

Heechul: You're going to marry me, okay?
Sungmin: But what if I don't want to? -innocent innocent-
Heechul: Ya!!! You wanna die? -evil eyes-

LOL.

she_devil666 October 18 2007, 16:55:15 UTC

This was a cute ending to an otherwise angsty fic! At least Kibum wasn't harmed in the making of this fic... >.> Is the title of this chapter the name of a song of their's (can't remember... and too lazy to look)?

sunflower_petal October 19 2007, 00:25:10 UTC

I wouldn't hurt Kibum~ dw about it. ^w^ I just needed someone "in the middle" and decided to use Kibum because I couldn't bear to write HanChul (I HATE that pairing)~ and Sungmin being affectionate toward Geng would've been weird.

she_devil666 October 19 2007, 03:34:11 UTC

I don't care for the HanChul pairing either. I rather them just be friends than have a relationship in a fic. And even if it was a cover, I'm sure Kibum was enjoying all the attention showered on him ^^

I guess I will have to listen to it more closely then~! I have the songs but I haven't listened to them in a sense. I knew the songs were playing but I didn't really hear them, you know what I mean? Ah~ white noise!

sunflower_petal October 19 2007, 10:17:19 UTC

Lol~ I'm sure he was even though he wouldn't show it. ^w^ I'm glad there's someone else who doesn't like HanChul<333

Haha~ the 2nd album is funny, because Don't Don is the only heavy song. Everything else is so soft and ballady or poppy lol The song in the fic that they were recoding is also on the 2nd album ^w^ It's called "Marry U"~ it's quite sweet and one of my favourites. ^w^