Heechul had always liked Sungmin. He was always so bright, cheerful and happy and he could always make Heechul smile. But - Heechul would never admit it. How could he, brat-master-times-a-hundred, admit that he actually liked a cute, innocent little kid? He always jealously albeit sneakily looked on while Sungmin laughing and giggling, chased
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sometimes it hard to swallow your pride indeed. poor sungminnie & heechullie...
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Thanks for reading though. :)
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and ur welcome~
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It was insipred by this pic though. ^w^
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Maybe it isn't too late...? We'll see! It depends lol because this was meant to be a stand alone piece~ but I'm all blah after it as well. They're my favourite OTP!
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I enjoyed reading. ^-^
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Unexpected reactions are good~ I'm glad you liked it:D♥
Thanks for reading!
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Will there be a continuation where there will be a happy ending and what not? Lol. Curious because I like your writing and never have read of a MinChul before.
You weren't horrible to them. Heechul deserved that because of his pride that brought him that loss. But the crying at the end, I so have not expected that but at least it lessen the ache I had for Sungmin. Lol. <333!
Looking forward for more of your writings. Kudos. ^-^
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Yeah, I hardly see any HeeMin fics... but I have read a few in this community. ^w^
Heechul is still human! :D Haha~ I couldn't help but make more Sungmin the vulnerable one, just because Heechul doesn't seem to have that sort of persona~ but the roles might be changed in my continuation... I'll start writing that soon lol.
I'm so happy you liked it! -lots of hearts for you- I was afraid that no one would. >w<;;
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Hehe thank you so much for reading (and liking) XDDD
I think one of Heechul's only weaknesses is his pride. >w<;;
The middle section repeat is meant to be there. :P The first is from Heechul's POV and the second is from Sungmin's POV~ ^w^
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Yes~ Heechul; master of ... hiding feelings? <- it sounded better in my head. 8D
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Don't worry~ I've decided that it won't end like this. I'm working on the next part as we speak. :)
I probably do have a few on my computer... somewhere (not written by me)~ but if you go here and just browse through~ I'm sure you'll be able to find a few. I think that's how I found the ones I read.
Thanks so much for reading. ^w^
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