[fic]VF: YA Comm Timed Challenge: Out of the Cold

[sunflower1343]

Title: Ya Comm Timed Challenge: Out of the Cold
Theme: Cold
Characters: Feilong, Tao, Asami, AxA referenced
Rated: PG-13
Time to write: 65 minutes, including spelling and grammar check.
Words: 1295

A/N This isn't the story I expected to write, but that's what happens with a timed writing lol.

Comments

[nbsiren]

*Thumbs up* :)

[sunflower1343]

Thanks. :)

[radcat38]

Oh, a new and wonderful Sunflower story.
Written well in the time allowed.
I love how you write our guys. :)
Nice glimpse into the relationships between them
esp Fei, Tao, and Asami.
So glad Aki was not found in that pit.
Loved it.
:)
cat

[sunflower1343]

Thanks. It was an unexpected story, not what I'd planned to write, but it turned out OK.

[eprime]

Augh, intense! You had me worried. I loved the glimpses of the ties flowing between them all.

[sunflower1343]

I thought about killing Aki, but I'd done that in stories like this so I didn't. It's a weird fic but I'd been reading about the slave trade out of China and how many people just end up with their money taken and in unmarked graves, and I knew that would draw Aki in, and being in China would draw Feilong in, etc etc.

[epistasthai]

Sorry, it's been said before, but - ooooh, a new Sunflower story!

I am so glad Aki wasn't in that pit. And I'm really hoping he isn't in the next one, and that he finds Asami soon.

So interesting to see the ties that bind each one of these people.

[sunflower1343]

Thanks! LOL, everyone sensed my initial thoughts about killing him. But not this time! Aki lives. :) These guys are all tied so closely- perhaps more in my head because of Therapy, but there are strong ties nonetheless.

[princessoftor]

Wow, that was something. I didn't think that they would find Aki in the pit - that would be so tragic if they did.
Very well written - nice to see Asami and Fei put aside their differences and Tao, oh Tao - the little boy is growing up.
Thank you!

[sunflower1343]

I think Asami and Feilong don't really have differences anymore. Asami has put the past behind him, and Feilong perhaps not so much, but for Aki he would. Tao is growing up, but in my universe he's growing up the way I want him to LOL. Thanks for reading this! :)