Okay, well I just left a comment on Stardust, but I'm still going to comment here =)
I definitely enjoy your style. There's a nostalgia to it. In this case it goes really well with that feeling of escapism. It's almost like you can see the two doing this for the rest of their lives, or at least a very very very long time ^^ Having Yul always touching Fany in different ways was a nice touch too. Haha, she definitely likes to touch Fany.
I cannot imagine anyone else but Yuri that would fit well into this character. Having X-Rated conversations in a foreign country is definitely enticing. YulTi is the new "it" thing.
I really enjoyed this. I felt bad for them. Just roaming around without any plans and dwindling cash. I found it sweet too nearer to the end. Very well written. I do enjoy your style
I never knew there was a Salamanca in the States. The first one that came to mind was in Spain, haha.
This was very nice. Taking road trips to unknown places and living on cents doesn't seem like fun, but there's certain freedom to it and you've captured it beautifully.
I could easily picture them hopping from town to town, just happy to be exploring a different world and doing their own thing :]
Also, thanks for the YulTi. They are like my crack couple.
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I definitely enjoy your style. There's a nostalgia to it. In this case it goes really well with that feeling of escapism. It's almost like you can see the two doing this for the rest of their lives, or at least a very very very long time ^^ Having Yul always touching Fany in different ways was a nice touch too. Haha, she definitely likes to touch Fany.
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Having X-Rated conversations in a foreign country is definitely enticing. YulTi is the new "it" thing.
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I found it sweet too nearer to the end. Very well written. I do enjoy your style
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(but get in line though gurl 8DDD)
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I never knew there was a Salamanca in the States. The first one that came to mind was in Spain, haha.
This was very nice. Taking road trips to unknown places and living on cents doesn't seem like fun, but there's certain freedom to it and you've captured it beautifully.
I could easily picture them hopping from town to town, just happy to be exploring a different world and doing their own thing :]
Also, thanks for the YulTi. They are like my crack couple.
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