Fic for Furiosity!

[tarie]

TO: furiosity
FROM: fleshdress
TITLE: Green-Eyed Monster
PAIRING: Harry/Blaise, Draco/Others, implied Draco/Blaise and Harry/Draco
RATING: NC-17
SUMMARY: Harry's seeing things he really thinks he shouldn't, and Blaise turns out to be less than helpful.
WARNINGS: none in particular
DISCLAIMER: JK Rowling owns these characters and I'm making no money from playing with

Comments

[gryffindorsnake]

Wow. I don't know what to say. This was brilliant. I think I'll put this in my memories.

(Sorry for the lame comment, but I really don't know what to say.)

[fleshdress]

No, no, that's lovely feedback, thanks! :)

[roastchicken]

Ouch. Gorgeous imagery, and very painful ending there. I like Blaise in this, his supposedly detached demeanor but his inability to hold back, and poor, suffering Harry...Really well done. *pets Draco*

[fleshdress]

Poor Draco needs a lot of petting. *g*
Thanks ever so for reading and commenting! :)

[furiosity]

:O

I.

You.

I just. You. This. lskdfjaljfklsajfklasjfklj! This is gorgeous and so intelligent and omgdark and I died! The way you characterised Harry here damn near took my breath away because yes! Given the circumstances you've established, this all fits. So much.

The way you use language, omg, the imagery, the sort of sepia tone to everything but the Draco vision. while he stared out of the window into the stars at Draco's sinuously writhing body eeeeeeeeeeee! Thank you so much, anon author. This is one of the best things I've read all year. ♥

*runs away squeeing*

[fleshdress]

Oh I'm so relieved you liked it! Your request was so full of potential and I flailed around for a while trying to make the most of it!
I'm so so pleased it worked for you, and thank you for the truly lovely feedback. :)

[eristeleute]

Fantastic. I particularly liked the last line: "I hope you weren't expecting a rescue. Your lover and your saviour…. What a shame." WOW. So spot on in your characterization and such an astute observation.

Thank you, anonymous author!

[fleshdress]

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such lovely feedback! :)

[gossymer]

That. Was Evil. Just.

That hurt so good and so badly, and i'm whimpering for Draco and want to comfort him, but he's in the corner of the rook rocking back and forth and-

You broke him.

...

Just was stunned with how brilliantly painful this fic was - and twisted but in the way humans are twisted and flawed. Excellent work.

[fleshdress]

Wow! Thank you so much for that really lovely feedback! I'm ever so pleased it worked for you! And yes, I do torture poor Draco more than he deserves. :)