how much do i love thee, let me explain it in A FUCKING HUGE ASS ESSAY.
um. yes. summer. li xiaji. you. miss with the cute cat. WHAT THE EFF DO YOU MEAN YOU CANT BE COUNTED ON EMILY'S LIST. JFC. then what do you call this poetry? this sublime piece of work that you have weaved with simple words of english? (no. dont answer. it was a rhetorical question.) ugh. ugh ugh ugh ugh UGH. i throw my hands up in the air sometimes, screaming, "A-YO, GOTTA FUCKING-POUR-MY-FEELS-ALL-OVER-THIS"
reality can be the worst kind of pretending, but it's so hard to just stop. wow. talk about something pulling at my kokoro making it go all doKI DO-ki and shit. i think this was favorite line along with but without action, wishes are nothing. wishes are bitter promises that are never fulfilled, never will be fulfilled.this entire fic in general had this air of nostalgia. like. a bittersweet aftertaste of black coffee, or a strong scented jasmine tea. you know? it's all warm and totally draws you in until the last line and then, woosh, you get to the end
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/SCREAMING. GOING TO GIVE YOU A PROPER COMMENT AGAIN. Most of my proper comments go to you, jie jie. <3
reality can be the worst kind of pretending, but it's so hard to just stop. Right from the first line, I saw the magic coming out. "Reality can be the worst kind of pretending." It was that part of that line.
learn shame. shame is not a thing to be learned, it's a lifestyle that cripples you down to your last tear. This is very honest and bitter, in my opinion. You're right, shame isn't something you can learn like your ABCs. It's something that's resulted from your actions and it's just there.
chanyeol is human. chanyeol is imperfect. chanyeol's eyes are bright with dimmed fire. I really like these lines.
I can never really find the words to express myself when it comes to your fics, because I don't want to simply "spazz" out. Your fics are worth so much more than that, so I always try my best to give proper comments. <3
lol, si min XD there's no magic from my writing. /pats head
thanks. I find that a lot of what I wrote was true, in some way or another, and somehow has been incorporated in my life as well. even though it was an AU, I was trying to make any part of it feel somewhat real.
aw, it's alright <3 I love your comments, and anything that I can get~
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um. yes. summer. li xiaji. you. miss with the cute cat. WHAT THE EFF DO YOU MEAN YOU CANT BE COUNTED ON EMILY'S LIST. JFC. then what do you call this poetry? this sublime piece of work that you have weaved with simple words of english? (no. dont answer. it was a rhetorical question.) ugh. ugh ugh ugh ugh UGH. i throw my hands up in the air sometimes, screaming, "A-YO, GOTTA FUCKING-POUR-MY-FEELS-ALL-OVER-THIS"
reality can be the worst kind of pretending, but it's so hard to just stop.
wow. talk about something pulling at my kokoro making it go all doKI DO-ki and shit. i think this was favorite line along with but without action, wishes are nothing. wishes are bitter promises that are never fulfilled, never will be fulfilled.this entire fic in general had this air of nostalgia. like. a bittersweet aftertaste of black coffee, or a strong scented jasmine tea. you know? it's all warm and totally draws you in until the last line and then, woosh, you get to the end ( ... )
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glad you liked those lines, I liked them too ;A;
omg your comment is poetic shush I'm just brewing in my feels over here how could you compare this with tea and coffee /sobs
I'm sorrryyyy /attempts to fix it
ILU too~
YESSEU
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reality can be the worst kind of pretending, but it's so hard to just stop.
Right from the first line, I saw the magic coming out. "Reality can be the worst kind of pretending." It was that part of that line.
learn shame. shame is not a thing to be learned, it's a lifestyle that cripples you down to your last tear.
This is very honest and bitter, in my opinion. You're right, shame isn't something you can learn like your ABCs. It's something that's resulted from your actions and it's just there.
chanyeol is human. chanyeol is imperfect. chanyeol's eyes are bright with dimmed fire.
I really like these lines.
I can never really find the words to express myself when it comes to your fics, because I don't want to simply "spazz" out. Your fics are worth so much more than that, so I always try my best to give proper comments. <3
And I need to shower, so BRB.
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lol, si min XD there's no magic from my writing. /pats head
thanks. I find that a lot of what I wrote was true, in some way or another, and somehow has been incorporated in my life as well. even though it was an AU, I was trying to make any part of it feel somewhat real.
aw, it's alright <3 I love your comments, and anything that I can get~
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I could see that.
<3
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