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[tonguecat]

Title: Maybe Somewhere
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Sakura
Word Count: 519
Rating: G
Summary: Sakura can't think of nothing.
Author's Notes: I don't write anything involving this series very well, so I figured that this was a good chance to practise.

Comments

[juin]

I've never been a big fan of Sakura, but this fic has a melancholy sort of tone that makes me sympathise with her in ways that the manga can't quite get me to do. And I really like the second last paragraph, it's a lovely ending.

[websofseaweed]

I agree; the second to last paragraph is incredibly powerful and a great ending to the story. The sentence that I really liked the most was "And Sakura doesn't mind being thought of as crazy. It's better than being thought of as weak."

Really, really good job. It's a very powerful drabble. Your writing is really good, and it fits the ficlet perfectly. Again, really nice. :D

[lattebayo]

Wow. I love this piece -- it's sad, slow and thoughtful, and the last paragraph... wow. :< Adding this to my memories~ ♥

[bunnynumber13]

This owned. You said so much in so little, giving a perfect canvas to Sakura's thoughts and feelings.

[tonguecat]

I'm glad you enjoyed it^^

[teruame]

You just made my mental version of the Naruto canon shiny again. *_* Great going here, I haven't read anything like this in a while.