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Zine Feedback for Authors!

Sep 21, 2006 15:36

Feedback for zine submissions found in the comments section of this post!

ETA: Please be sure that, when leaving feedback, you're hitting 'reply' to the actual initial feedback comment, and not a reply to the entry. There's a few at the end there that I have--no clue where they should go.

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FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore svmadelyn September 21 2006, 20:48:19 UTC

Please submit your feedback for this story here!

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore etben September 22 2006, 14:01:15 UTC

Mmmm. Tasty!

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore wildestranger September 22 2006, 14:03:32 UTC

Hee. Hot and lovely. ;)

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore toomuchplor September 22 2006, 17:32:48 UTC

Hee! I love socially retarded Rodney and helplessly attracted John. *g*

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore scribblinlenore September 22 2006, 19:44:44 UTC

I have never gotten anything even remotely as good as this out of a heat wave. I'm just saying!

This was really fun!

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore wychwood September 22 2006, 20:20:26 UTC

Ahahaha. This was fun. I love how clueless Rodney is. And poor pining John :)

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore skoosiepants September 22 2006, 23:51:34 UTC

just so very wonderful and perfect *nodsnodsnods*

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore tesserae_ September 23 2006, 14:41:24 UTC

Marvelous!

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore barely_bean September 23 2006, 21:17:15 UTC

Aww. I love how Rodney's always so surprised when good things happen to him. Yay for heat waves!

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore melagan September 23 2006, 22:24:40 UTC

And we know by now I have a wicked John Wants kink and this was perfect.

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore ozsaur September 24 2006, 01:33:42 UTC

Love the languid feel, like a long, summer day. Enjoyed it very much.

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore velocitygrass September 24 2006, 09:23:05 UTC

That was sweet. I love Pining!John and then Rodney being more tempting each day.

careful, careful, careful
It so gets to me how afraid he is and then to see that Rodney feels the same and it will all be all right or actually so much better than all right.

It's not the Mai Tai's and the damn sunscreen, McKay
No, it isn't. And I adore it when they're so in love.

Thank you!

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore saba1789 September 24 2006, 09:23:19 UTC

That was seriously hot! Thank you very much for writing and sharing this :-) .

Re: FB for Mai Tai's and Coconut Sunscreen by Elandria Lore devildoll September 25 2006, 18:05:45 UTC

Rodney had a surprisingly nice back and the only way John could stop himself from staring was to close his eyes and pretend to sleep, often leading to vivid half dreams where Rodney talked him into an orgasm.

I love this image so much, and then how it was echoed at the end of the story.

I read this over the weekend, and even though the temperature was completely reasonable, I was having flashbacks to heat wave this summer, and how miserable it was. Sadly, in my house it did not lead to John and Rodney having sex. *g*

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