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Zine Feedback for Authors!

Sep 21, 2006 15:36

Feedback for zine submissions found in the comments section of this post!

ETA: Please be sure that, when leaving feedback, you're hitting 'reply' to the actual initial feedback comment, and not a reply to the entry. There's a few at the end there that I have--no clue where they should go.

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FB for Frictionless by Julad svmadelyn September 21 2006, 20:41:38 UTC

Please submit your feedback for this story here!

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad melissima September 22 2006, 20:43:54 UTC

Charlie could be a pain in the ass on days of the month that were prime numbers, and Charlie had to respect Don's boundaries on dates that were composite. Charlie always knew, like he knew his own name, whether the date was prime or composite. Don never knew, but from then on he figured that if Charlie was bugging him, the date must be prime, so he let it happen.

hee hee hee hee hee hee! If I had any brain power left over from the morons I'm supporting with their computers today I'd figure out the next few prime dates, but I'm too tired. Still, \o/ !

I loved Charlie stealing a kiss while handing Don his eggs, too. :)

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad julad September 28 2006, 22:05:20 UTC

Thank you! (I felt like I should at least count the number of prime dates in a month but then I was like, omg if it's a really large number I'll have to change that part, so I don't want to know.)

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad 1trackmind September 22 2006, 20:53:23 UTC

I really, really like this one. The flow of the story is lovely and I like the gentle humor.

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad julad September 28 2006, 22:05:53 UTC

Thank you! :)

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad oxoniensis September 22 2006, 22:51:21 UTC

This is gorgeous. I love the feeling of meant-to-be that permeates it.

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad julad September 28 2006, 22:06:32 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad saba1789 September 24 2006, 08:43:37 UTC

Very very nice. Thanks for writing and sharing this :-) .

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad julad September 28 2006, 22:08:06 UTC

Thank you very much. Hope you enjoyed the summercon!

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad saba1789 September 30 2006, 07:07:06 UTC

I absolutely did enjoy it, thank you :-) .

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad ladyra September 26 2006, 04:33:41 UTC

How wonderful was this? Happy sigh. And I see several people have already chosen the prime and composite number days of the month as their fave part, and I agree. Perfect. I need to come up with some of those systems myself. Lovely story.

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad julad September 28 2006, 22:12:26 UTC

Thank you very much. :) The prime days was added right at the end, after my betas found the first draft of the story kind of creepy like a horror movie - everything was too perfect, so something horrible was going to happen. *g* So I went back and added some problems and then realised, oh god, far from being perfect, they were going to need some kind of system just to say sane. *g*

Re: FB for Frictionless by Julad svmadelyn July 3 2007, 18:03:16 UTC

So sweet, so very Donlike.

I love it.

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