Going to Meeting (12/29/15 WC 1988) Q

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Going to Meeting

There is no sensual pleasure in the world comparable to the delight and satisfaction that a good man takes in doing good.
∼ Tillotson

While empyting and rearranging

Comments

Critique Group's Comments from Where'sMeKilt

[summercircles]

"So what trouble did you get yourself into on Saturday?" ... "Several times during the night, random gunshots interrupt her slumber,"

And she's not worried?

Re: Critique Group's Comments from Where'sMeKilt

[pandemo]

LOL! Any town not having an ordinance against firing guns in town could have shots heard at night. She just never dreams it might be directed at HER

Critique Group's Comments from Where'sMeKilt

[summercircles]

Staying in the local motel in separate rooms and going together to Ellie's for breakfast equals a federal case? Not!

"Del motel. Vamos al café para desayunarnos."

(I'm not sure if the flag here is for the Spanish or Cu's actions.)

Re: Critique Group's Comments from Where'sMeKilt

[pandemo]

This time, Despina's thoughts precede her Spanish. I figured since motel and café the same in both languages that it would be understandable...

Cu is again showing jealousy upon finding her with another man. She, unaccustomed to thinking of herself as desirable, is, as usual, misreading the situation.

[sydneydaile]

Missing a period here: Her voice sounds timid to her ear

Cu certainly is possessive of Despina. I'm curious to see how it will turn out that Tex is bringing school supplies to her. Hopefully he'll behave himself in the light of day (and without the provocation of alcohol).