Nothing makes me happier than the Slayer claiming her Watcher and boffing him senseless when he submits!
Not sure I have any major plot commentary to do here {grin} and that's perfectly fine as well, because all the masterful sex was truly yummy. And the interplay between them all as they worked things out was great.
I advise treading carefully in the land of ABO kink. There are some variations that you might not care for. And others that might be as scorching as it gets; who knows? But there's lots of mpreg, that's for sure!
I had to go read up on A/B/O to catch up. It's not my thing, but I enjoyed the dynamics of the story and how you worked the relationships into the trope. I also thought it was a fun read, well paced, and well written. And just when I had more questions as to how the alpha/beta/omega traits worked in this particular AU, you had those questions answered. I was definitely hooked from the outset as I love reading about how cultural and sociological behaviors work with physical biological behaviors and needs. Well done! :)
I confess that one of my big worries writing this one was too much expository foofahrah. Half the job is world-building here, because every ABOverse has its own little variations on the theme that need to be described without any of that "As you know, Bob, omegas go into heat once a month" stuff. So happy to hear that the expository lumps were the right-sized lumps for you!
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Nothing makes me happier than the Slayer claiming her Watcher and boffing him senseless when he submits!
Not sure I have any major plot commentary to do here {grin} and that's perfectly fine as well, because all the masterful sex was truly yummy. And the interplay between them all as they worked things out was great.
Satisfied sigh.
Thanks for sharing!
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Oh and Watcher/Slayer yumminess... *sighs*
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