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secondalto July 23 2012, 00:42:24 UTC
I like that they're ending up one big, maybe happy, family. Well done.

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antennapedia July 28 2012, 02:43:22 UTC
Thank you! You know my essentially sappy take on this group of people.

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craterdweller July 23 2012, 00:51:59 UTC
This was well done! You always seem to broaden my vanilla het horizons LOL!

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antennapedia July 28 2012, 02:43:56 UTC
That's me: broadening your fannish horizons in really weird ways, once a year!

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chevron17 July 23 2012, 07:00:51 UTC
Doing my happy dance!

Nothing makes me happier than the Slayer claiming her Watcher and boffing him senseless when he submits!

Not sure I have any major plot commentary to do here {grin} and that's perfectly fine as well, because all the masterful sex was truly yummy. And the interplay between them all as they worked things out was great.

Satisfied sigh.

Thanks for sharing!

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antennapedia July 28 2012, 02:45:12 UTC
You are most welcome! Hooray for Slayer-on-Watcher senseless boffing!

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seldomifever July 23 2012, 11:51:33 UTC
I'd never heard of this alpha omega stuff til you started talking about it, but now I think it's my new kink. Yowsa. Nice work, you!

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antennapedia July 28 2012, 02:46:31 UTC
I advise treading carefully in the land of ABO kink. There are some variations that you might not care for. And others that might be as scorching as it gets; who knows? But there's lots of mpreg, that's for sure!

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littleotter73 July 23 2012, 15:33:25 UTC
I had to go read up on A/B/O to catch up. It's not my thing, but I enjoyed the dynamics of the story and how you worked the relationships into the trope. I also thought it was a fun read, well paced, and well written. And just when I had more questions as to how the alpha/beta/omega traits worked in this particular AU, you had those questions answered. I was definitely hooked from the outset as I love reading about how cultural and sociological behaviors work with physical biological behaviors and needs. Well done! :)

Oh and Watcher/Slayer yumminess... *sighs*

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antennapedia July 28 2012, 02:49:59 UTC
I confess that one of my big worries writing this one was too much expository foofahrah. Half the job is world-building here, because every ABOverse has its own little variations on the theme that need to be described without any of that "As you know, Bob, omegas go into heat once a month" stuff. So happy to hear that the expository lumps were the right-sized lumps for you!

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