This is simply awesome! First off, thank you *so* much for being willing to share your writing with us!! Especially because you've got such a wonderful grasp of both Giles' and Xanders' voices! I love the way you've structured, this, with the thoughts mirroring/expanding/glossing what comes out of their mouths, and how they both get a little frustrated with each other and yet, near the end, both are so clearly able to see the other. It's such a great way to bring them closer together. And I've often thought there must be more give and take to their relationship in S4. Thank you SO much for posting!
Bravo for your maiden voyage into fanfic! And hooray for Giles/Xander togetherness! I have a weakness for seeing them together in that early season 4 slump they both had.
Thank you. I would have enjoyed more Giles/Xander interaction. The characters are so different, the writers could have played them off one another and had fun with them.
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Good job!
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Thank you.
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Thank you for the nice comment and for putting all this together. You've done a lovely job.
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It was fun to write and imagine what they were *really* thinking.
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I would have enjoyed more Giles/Xander interaction. The characters are so different, the writers could have played them off one another and had fun with them.
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a very engaging interaction between them.
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