I might as well ditch my dismay; Yoochun/Junsu
I might as well ditch my dismay
694 words. PG-13.
- DBSK; Yoochun/Junsu.
author onew.
summary There are three things to be noted about Yoochun: he has no sense of balance, he is a man of very weak resolve, and he has developed a liking for Junsu.
notes Written for a challenge at kpfw 9.0. I haven't written for DBSK in so long, much less YooSu, so ( Read more... )
overall I have to say the fic got better and better towards the end, both in style/writing and content ♥
If anything, he could just be going through this awkward phase.
haha, I'm sure he has wondered that already, in reality I mean. but srsly.. you don't have a years long awkward phase ;D
"I wonder if I try too hard sometimes,"
I really like how you portrayed Junsu here
Yoochun's breath hitches when Junsu loses balance and the distance between them is drawn to a mere few centimeters. Junsu's lips hover, and then linger, and when Junsu pulls away Yoochun grips the edge of the washing machine tight for fear of falling.
so Junsu kissed him right, right? lol I'm not really sure but the 'linger' makes me think he kissed him ;;
(ofc then I know they kissed bc they talk about it. lol) but I like how you described it, that like I couldn't really be sure of it at first.
and how it was an accident. and how chun gripped the edge of the washing machine.
"I like you, if that actually matters."
this is the point where it gets really really perfect in this fic, like everything ;; I love from this point onwards everything ♥
such a great way of describing things too.
"You look funny when you're embarrassed, did you know?"
I LOVE THIS LINE. like really. I can totally imagine him saying that ;; ♥
Junsu gets back at him by sneaking in a kiss, brief and light and warm despite the cool air all around them.
SQUEAL ;~; ♥
(idk i love that junsu is the one kissing yoochun)
So he still likes Junsu, only that things are much more complicated and different now.
ohhh I like how you worded it this way with 'complicated'
and yes yes, just keep observing/STARING like you always do, chunface lol
♥
so much love for this fic ;;
and it fixed my REALLY BIG NEEDY craving for dbsk/yoosu fics omg ;~;
I wish I could get ppl to write more/again yoosu/dbsk fics ToT
thank you so much for writing and sharing this <3
(finally again a fic to add to my list ;;)
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Quotebacks, omg ;____; Thank you for taking time to read and actually quoting stuff in your comment. That really means a lot ♥ And I wish the great fandom writers would go back and write fics, too! I miss the boys :(
Again, thanks! ♥ And I should get to writing that fic for you...
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