Reagents; Jonghyun/Taemin

Oct 14, 2010 23:37


Reagents
11267 words. PG-13.
- SHINee; Jonghyun/Taemin.

author onew.
summary The hardest part of being a secret is being found out.
notes Originally wanted to edit this fic before posting is for real, but RL got in the way. For kpop_olymfics. Special thanks to Dan naegative, Serena pixeltoy and my sister yumeyana for the general hand-holding and beta. Also, thank you to all of the members ( Read more... )

fandom: shinee, challenge: kpop_olymfics, couple: taemin/jonghyun

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tiggie0307 October 14 2010, 22:04:54 UTC
Spot this I will be back

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specialises October 15 2010, 00:25:43 UTC
okay, ngl i just took half an hour to read this. let me quote. and i hope you don't mind a little concrit cause i spotted a slight error and a general comment on something that confuses me at times.

there's a dog guarding the front door - he'll bite your leg off." Jonghyun chuckles. He's tempted to ask, 'Oh really, he will?', but then he might just get his leg bitten off and it will be impossible for him to do all those backflips and weird body twists anymore.
this is cute(: somehow i can imagine the look on his face, lol.

Getting into trouble is for noobs."

"Boobs? What boobs? I said I need a stick."
oh god, jongkey bff-ery. i like(:

"And blades. Don't forget the blades." Kibum laughs a bit.

"They'll cut your balls off when they catch you," Kibum kids, and Jonghyun swears he'd be hitting Kibum on the arm if Kibum was beside him.
love the portrayal here cause it really does seem like something which would happen irl.

The thing about Jonghyun, Kibum thinks, is that behind that cool and generally douchey image that he puts up is a ( ... )

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specialises October 15 2010, 00:26:10 UTC
holy crap, this is longer than i expected. sorry /:

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onew October 15 2010, 00:58:31 UTC

Glad you liked it! Ngl, writing this was pretty draining, and I'm glad that people liked the fic, all in all.

I'll PM you about the crit ;)

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colorphase October 16 2010, 08:40:05 UTC
am i late? but w/e i just wanna say that your writings are absolutely amazing.
this is one of my favorite fic, srsly.

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miuratenshi October 16 2010, 18:07:21 UTC
I really like this!

Jonghyun and Key's friendship is cute. I love their banter so much. And I was on the edge of my seat, trying to decide whether Taemin was really good or not. I'm so glad that things ended well. Thank you so much for sharing this. ♥

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laora17 July 3 2011, 06:48:54 UTC
Want moar Jongtae! :D

And I loved the Jongkey hahaha

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