Sunbathing (challenge #2: but you look really hot!) R

Jun 04, 2008 21:26

Sunbathing
789 words . R
- pairing Kangin/Leeteuk
-sidepairing Hankyung/Siwon/Heechul, Eunhyuk/Donghae/Kyuhyun

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# challenge: but you look really hot!, @ author: no1_jo

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momiji_manjuu June 4 2008, 20:54:31 UTC
Mmm you know I love this, but as always I'm going to flail some more XDD

he was FAR more classy and refined than those Hilton tarts thank you very much.
That made me giggle XDD He's SO much better than that! <3

Even more amusing were the wicker fans he was wheedling his poor hapless minions into wafting him with.
And that TOTALLY cracked me up XDD I actually burst out laughing XD

He was so animated as he talked, emphasising everything with over exaggerated facial expressions and flailing limbs as he made his point.
LOL that paints such a great picture XD Albeit slightly comical.. <3

But damn, that was hot <33 You know I don't like foodsmut, but you always seem to make it hot anyway! I don't know what it is you do, but it's definitely good XDD

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<3<3<3 no1_jo June 4 2008, 21:08:15 UTC
SPAC I linked to go wooot I've finished not to poke for comments!!! ♥♥♥

He SO is!!! He could out pretty, bitch or sass them!!!!

HAHAHAHA YAY!!! I still can't believe I can make fics funny yet, but i love that you laugh <3

God, lol Leeteuk is a flaily nightmare ^_^

YES! I keep making you read foodsmut *dead* But i started of the you look hot physically and hot HAWT idea and ice cream just happened ^_^

THANK YOU *glomptackles*

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Re: <3<3<3 momiji_manjuu June 4 2008, 21:21:00 UTC
OOoooh that icon alone was worth the comment XDD
And I know you weren't poking for comments, but like I said before, I comment to leave my mark, hehe XD

*loves on* This is just win. As always. I think it's impossible for you to churn out anything even drifting in the vague vicinity of failure XD

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dream4fatgirl June 5 2008, 12:42:48 UTC
SUPER HAWT!

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no1_jo June 5 2008, 20:21:29 UTC
Thank you XD I'm glad you think so ^_^

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blessedangel13 June 5 2008, 19:41:20 UTC
I died a little. Multiple times. XDD And not just because the image of Eeteuk eating off of Kangin looks so good. xDD SiHanChul had something to do with it, and the adorableness of a water gun battle. <3333

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no1_jo June 5 2008, 19:56:22 UTC
Awwww thank you!!! Honestly this comment means a lot to me, since I'm getting precious few :S and such a lovely one too <3

I blame the SiHanChul on this HanChul cheerleader fic I'm working on and tey keep moseying into my others wheth I invite them or not!! and yay!! EunHae kiddy love FTW XDD

Thank you SO MUCH for commenting ^_^

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blessedangel13 June 5 2008, 20:44:17 UTC
You're welcome. ^-^

I LOVE SiHanChul so it was a nice bonus to tasty KangTeuk. xDD

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avh8 June 5 2008, 20:12:08 UTC
omg~ I'm not usually a fan of food-smut but this I love <3
The KT is smexy although teukie is sort of comic right through out XD
and rofl! you paint a priceless picture with Chul ^^
Haeface is so cute *squishes him*
anyway loved it ^^ good job!

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no1_jo June 5 2008, 21:16:04 UTC
Wooooo thank you!!
LOL yes, my view of Leeteuk is always so flaily spazz that he comes of comic ^_^
HAHAHA yay!! thanks, he would mae a great classy movie star XDDD

thank you so much for commenting <3

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beevosteethos June 6 2008, 13:41:46 UTC
*snorts* I need some sort of stamp on my head, one that reads 'I'm late, I'm sorry'

I love that you wrote Kangteuk *gibbers*

while Kyuhyun did his very best to ignore that he even existed, or so it appeared, until he pulled a water pistol from behind his back and got Donghae right in the face with a jet
LMAO! Sneaky Kyuhyun FTW <3333 **loves on him**

maybe Elizabeth Taylor or Audrey Hepburn, because he was FAR more classy and refined than those Hilton tarts thank you very much
*sniggers* and then
Even more amusing were the wicker fans he was wheedling his poor hapless minions into wafting him with.
Heechul using his bitches well <33333

He was flustered and didn't want to stare, or worse be seen doing it, removing his own tshirt to cover his burning face
Hahahaha! Bless Kangin, you will never avoid the sexy teukie.

LOL! I love him trying to not look but being drawn to him anyway XDDDD and then Teukie's wild gesture-talking.

Leaning up on his elbows to inspect the sticky 'damage', a disapproving frown all ready and raring to ( ... )

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