I I JUST THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL I wrote this prompt at a time of great sadness and depression for me, and I think that you really captured that heavy, horrible, frightening isolation and pain very well on both Junmyeon and Jongdae. I also appreciated the accidental murders-it was a really interesting point of the story and I enjoyed how it furthered their distrust in things that seemed to be too good to be true. I'm glad that Junmyeon stayed in the end....eeeeeeeee let me squish you lovely lovely (currently) anon!!! <(>~<)> thank you so much for his really touching work! Also, I would like to say-Junmyeon's thoughts on suicide, and his struggle to "stay above that" really spoke to me. Thank you for touching my heart and giving me hope!
Oh wow this was so wonderful to read! i dunno the writing was so calming & with the more deeper storyline it was just perfect. the feeling of isolation was incorporated so beautifully, something i think most of up would be able to relate to, & idk i think that's really wonderful. the part where joonmyeon wishes he would disappear into the sea was really touching. oh & awesome work with the characterization! :D really loved this story !
This is a piece of art. Filled with so many emotions and poetry♡ It was so heartbreaking how neither of them felt like they belonged into this world but even more happy did I feel when the two of them finally found each other. The struggle to open up again and let someone in was so well discribed it gave me goosebumps♡
All in all a beautiful story♡ Thanks for writing it.
this is so breathtakingly beautiful. everything- to how junmyun felt, to jongdae, to everyone around them- it was written so well, so thoughtfully planned. I just- ugh. I love this fic. there haven't been any lengthy and quality suchen fics lately, so this was definitely a lovely surprise.
I enjoyed this. their powers just dancing along side each other. and the way you ended it. ugh. beautiful.
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THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
I wrote this prompt at a time of great sadness and depression for me, and I think that you really captured that heavy, horrible, frightening isolation and pain very well on both Junmyeon and Jongdae. I also appreciated the accidental murders-it was a really interesting point of the story and I enjoyed how it furthered their distrust in things that seemed to be too good to be true. I'm glad that Junmyeon stayed in the end....eeeeeeeee let me squish you lovely lovely (currently) anon!!! <(>~<)> thank you so much for his really touching work!
Also, I would like to say-Junmyeon's thoughts on suicide, and his struggle to "stay above that" really spoke to me. Thank you for touching my heart and giving me hope!
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oh & awesome work with the characterization! :D
really loved this story !
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This is a piece of art. Filled with so many emotions and poetry♡
It was so heartbreaking how neither of them felt like they belonged into this world but even more happy did I feel when the two of them finally found each other.
The struggle to open up again and let someone in was so well discribed it gave me goosebumps♡
All in all a beautiful story♡
Thanks for writing it.
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this is so breathtakingly beautiful. everything- to how junmyun felt, to jongdae, to everyone around them- it was written so well, so thoughtfully planned. I just- ugh. I love this fic. there haven't been any lengthy and quality suchen fics lately, so this was definitely a lovely surprise.
I enjoyed this. their powers just dancing along side each other.
and the way you ended it. ugh. beautiful.
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this was simply beautiful <3
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