Fic: Pretend

[sugarfrosting]

Title: Pretend
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yoochun, implied Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: PG-13

I...what? Idek. Written for ravenlock_3's prompt of Jaechun: scorned love as part of my DBSK pairings challenge here. There're still pairings unclaimed, so any prompts would help me so much <3 And, also, because I promised halcyon_morn fic before I leave tomorrow for a chalet, so, here, the

Comments

[wmelon_kaiye]

Me

[wmelon_kaiye]

-Flails-

Omgosh, I love D:

I'm surprised actually. I could differentiate between one Jaejoong and the next and you didn't even have to use different names for them. I'm really impressed. XD

[vanny92]

WOAHHHHHH.
Was kinda confusing at first, xD

But I caught if in the later parts of the story.
very creative!
xD

Great job.
<3

[halcyon_morn]

DOPPELGÄNGER!FIC FTW! Jaejoong talking to himself makes for the best conversations: ("What about Yoochun, then?" "Oh, no, I'm not sorry for that." and "What’s your Yoochun like?” “Smooth. Quite a talker. Bit of a bastard.” “Oh. Not so different from ours, then.” are particular favorites).

In any event, I knew I was right to believe in you! ♥ Have fun at the chalet, and let's all hope there's loads of good fic waiting for you when you come back. ;D

[azurehook]

there should totally be more doppelganger fics! This is awesome; I love how you pulled off the two Jaejoongs without even changing names. Major props!

And I love the tension and change with JaeHo and JaeChun. Makes it so real. and the dialogue is yum.

[thisistony]

:X Min is the keeper of the secrets! I loved it :x I also have a special place for double fics :X And Jae and Jae and then there's Chun and osdgfijsdognsdnsdnfsn.

♥